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I need a hot shower.

I heard some weird noises as I was walking back, like thunder and metal scraping against metal. Has anyone else heard anything? I'm not in the mood for any cryptic answers, so if you aren't going to say something clearly, don't say anything.

I'm really getting sick of being kept in the dark.

Filtered to Ganta

I found Nagi.

Private to Smoker

I understand a man named Nagi is with you. I was wondering if I could come talk to him.

Eve, thanks for coming on the walk with me. Sorry it was kind of awkward.

Halloween is coming soon. This hardly seems like the kind of place to celebrate it, but it doesn't seem like very much else is going on. Does anyone want to cook something or dress up or something? I've been trying to get a hold of Kairi to come up with ideas, but she hasn't ( Read more... )

An entire year.

If I were back home, she'd probably drag me out to pick acorns or go look at leaves or something. Childish. I wonder if they went on a school trip this year. Probably to Kyoto or some place typical like that. Ugh, I bet it was crowded with tourists too.

I wonder if they even remem

I wish I could have taken pictu

It's too cold

Does anyone have any information on what's going on at the docks? I'm kind of curious but trying to find out for myself when I haven't even been allowed outside the past few weeks doesn't seem like a good idea.

I recognize a couple of voices from before. If... there's any new people, uh, my name's Ritsuka. Nice to meet you I guess...I wonder if ( Read more... )

[ Ritsuka's voice cuts in faintly at first, as though he's placed far away from the microphone ( Read more... )

I'm glad I didn't spend much time at the casino; it sounds like it didn't end up well for anyone. Things are stagnant again. It's hard to focus on what I need to get done when it feels like I'm not progressing at all. I don't want to resign myself to this life, but every day it feels more and more like maybe this way is better for everyone.

I didn ( Read more... )

I was a little weirded out when this turned up all of a sudden, but I guess she's not as unmanageable as some of the others. I'm a little doubtful about her "attack" powers though. And since I'll just have to learn how to defend myself.

I'm glad the planes are back to normal, but it begs the question of how. Has anyone been able to figure anything ( Read more... )

What was...

Even after meeting with Gaea (which almost got us killed), I still feel like we're not much closer to figuring any of this out. How we can reverse the planes again, how I can get back the memories that were stolen from me, what our purpose is in Nuadoria. No one has any answers, just riddles and tasks and more questionsIt's giving me a ( Read more... )