I'm back... Mana Mantra: Prologue

Jan 21, 2005 19:28

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Good stuff! anonymous January 31 2005, 23:43:29 UTC
Kudos kudos, looks good!

Divya

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Nice! anonymous February 7 2005, 20:58:56 UTC
Oooooh, fic. I likes it, precious. I especially like how you've written the Marauders' interaction. "I'm going over to... er... say hello.": priceless.

And ooh, a post that names me. With very kind words. Ty, Olympe. I really like what you've written so far, so it's terrific to hear that I had anything to do with this at all.

Just a nitpick: does the Marauders' bit really occur on 5 June? I realise Sirius has already run away from home, but news of his mother's death two days ago in Grimmauld Place would reach him by then, wouldn't it? Pubbing seems an unlikely reaction to that, even from Sirius.

Off to read next chapter!

K.

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Blunder olympe_maxime February 8 2005, 07:09:07 UTC
Yeah, I realised my 'dating' blunder before I shipped off this prologue to my SQ beta - so it's been corrected. Also, the Marauders' section in the prologue is going to be moved - I've rethought things a little, and it fits better in chapter 2. I'm going to put up a revised prologue today.

Sorry for the confusion!

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