Where's the warmth?

[sandeullielove]

Title: Where’s the warmth?
Rating: G
Pairing: JinChan (Jinyoung x Gongchan)
Summary: The heater’s spoiled and Jinyoung couldn’t sleep due to the cold. Where’s the warmth so he could get some sleep?
Note: First time writing a member x member drabble so bear with me.

Comments

[mangoedust]

I will be the FIRST to comment ^^
This was utterly cute <3333
Kekeke~~! I wish Gongchan could hug me in my sleep too TAT
It's snowing here...I need some warmth too xDD
Though my blankets are quite thick xDD
Anyway, thank you for sharing this wonderful
drabble dear ^^

[sandeullielove]

Heehee. Thanks :)

[sai12]

First I want to say this is adorable!! And I'm glad you've mastered LJ! :P

But I noticed a few tiny errors....

nd the boys had to leave in the cold for a while until it was repaired.

leave should be live right? ^___^

The younger one had a blanket in his hands was his blanket.

Repeating yourself a bit...take out one of the blankets here so it is either "had a blanket in his hands" or "in his hands was his blanket"

Hope you don't mind!

[sandeullielove]

Gosh. Didn't notice those mistakes. :(
Anyway, thanks for pointing out.

[sai12]

Ahh if you didn't reply to this I could have edited my comment lol

NP! You're writing is cute, I look forward to reading more! ^___^

[mahjongghoney]

actually a drabble is exactly 100 words. but that's nitpicking lol, this was very nice!

chanshik and jinyoung are so cute here! left me feeling all warm and fuzzy.

[nicolochy]

This fic makes me feel like I'm getting myself a good night's sleep too. It's warm and fuzzy all over.