Hotel Song Rewind

[ohsugarandsalt]

A/N This is really just a rewrite/reworking of an old story ‘Clean White Love’ which is a piece that I’m really not comfortable to have on my journal. In short, I’ve grown up, opinions have changed on certain subject matters and therefore, I don’t agree or like the world and dynamic I’ve built and handled with that story anymore. So as a

Comments

[planet_ac]

Uhm...can I just say that I like this very, very much?

This one goes into 'Memories', to join 'Hand-Me-Down Heart' <3

Thank you for sharing.

[ohsugarandsalt]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[ext_557465]

Spot, will read it later.

Also in response to your A/N, I wanted to tell you that I absolutely and totally loved "Clean White Love". It's so rare to find stories about crude and/or realistic subjects. So (as a fan) I'm quite saddened by the fact that you took it down. Nonetheless I respect your decision, it's your work after all =)

Keep up the awesomeness author ! Hwaiting ^^

[ohsugarandsalt]

Regarding my A/N, my intention was definitely not to disappoint readers who've enjoyed my work. I'm just not very proud with the way I handled the subject matter because I feel that people take away with a different perception of the world after reading a subject matter they haven't come across before and that story does not reflect on a view that I'd like readers to take away with.

Anyway that was tl;dr, thank you so very much for the kind encouragement!

[thehost909]

Love love love, freaking loved it. Thanks so much ^^

[ohsugarandsalt]

Glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading!

[ohsugarandsalt]

Thank you very much for that input! I'm very flattered, and I'll use it as encouragement to continue to try and improve my writing.

[razor_funkydude]

Woah! You blew me away with this one! Kudos! :)

Totally an improved version... ^_^

I like how you execute the feeling of uncertainty between YulSic.

Will be anticipating you next shot! =]

[ohsugarandsalt]

Thank you! I appreciate your encouragement!