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RE: 2/2 caranfindel November 5 2017, 11:04:52 UTC
Oh my heart!!!! This is SO GOOD. <33333

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RE: 2/2 lennelle November 5 2017, 11:05:02 UTC
This line: 'he’s duct tape and safety pins, and sometimes one slips loose, and he has to patch it up before everything falls apart'. Peeeerfect! Because Sam's SO good at making it seem like he's got a handle on things when he really doesn't.
I hope they explore this in some way on the show, at least let Jack learn what his biological father did to Sam, or show Sam struggling.
Great job, I loved it :)

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RE: 2/2 rirren November 5 2017, 12:33:37 UTC
Ooh I loved this. I'd also like to see this explored on the show.

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RE: 2/2 anonymous November 5 2017, 14:36:29 UTC
Yesssssss. This. Exactly this.

The boys have so much PTSD and it bothers me that the show just glosses over it. Show me Sam freaking out over Jack reminding him of Lucifer. Show me the fresh from Purgatory Dean pulling a weapon on some civilian who made a sudden noise. Show me how it affects the boys when they have to work with a victim who has been through some of the same traumas they have.

Perfect story is perfect with the tie ins to the show ("I'm bored!" Safety pins and duct tape.) and the no more tomato soup was a nice touch.

Thank you for writing this.

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RE: 2/2 anonymous November 5 2017, 14:37:18 UTC
oh, whoops. This was dragonflybeach, the original prompter. I'm not sure why I'm anon.

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RE: 2/2 quickreaver November 6 2017, 08:07:44 UTC
Oh, so many clever touches, like the soup, and poor Jack AND POOR SAM. So much love!

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RE: 2/2 madebyme_x December 19 2017, 15:35:02 UTC
I really would love to Show acknowledge this a little too - you did it perfectly! Take care :)

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RE: 2/2 cowboyguy January 30 2018, 03:19:46 UTC
Oooh, this was gorgeous! You captured each of them so perfectly, and I love the way it twists from Jack and reality to Lucifer and the cage and back again, all of these things that are so emotionally intertwined. Excellent job!

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