The Hashish-Eater

Nov 16, 2010 21:40

Title: The Hashish-Eater
Author: minviendha
Rating: PG13
Summary: Worst locked room puzzle ever.
Word Count: 3981
Warnings: uh. Nasty nasty detox, self-mutilation, blood-drinking, and more hurt than comfort? ...>>
Notes: Still ridiculously new to this fandom and not quite sure what I'm doing, more often than not...but damn, some of those prompts were too ( Read more... )

[when the levee breaks], &fic challenge, self-harm, withdrawal, .genre » gen

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embroiderama November 17 2010, 13:57:32 UTC
Oh wow, this is brutal, but I love that the details are so sharp. The moment when, in the middle of it all, Dean remembered eight year-old Sam--that was wonderful.

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minviendha November 18 2010, 02:17:09 UTC
I like that part myself (if I may say so) so I'm glad someone else picked it out! And yeah, this fandom really seems to bring out the brutality in my writing. Then again, I really don't need to wonder why...

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minviendha November 18 2010, 02:19:03 UTC
Your little prompt was brilliant and fantastic to work with, so thank you! I've seen your prompts before and they're practically stories in themselves, so you deserve at least partial credit for this.

...though I still appreciate the compliment. XD

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fruitgardentea November 17 2010, 16:44:31 UTC
This is really good! I enjoyed it a lot.

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minviendha November 18 2010, 02:19:40 UTC
I'm glad you did!

Aww, the face in your icon. :(

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twirlycurls November 17 2010, 20:06:09 UTC
Ack, my poor Sammy!
Drinking his own blood, OMG. I just, just, can't even!

He remembers that in the four months Without Dean he liked it when she did that because it was such a Dean face.
I love that this is how he thinks of it, the months Without Dean.

Maybe Sam’s dried out. Maybe it’s over and they’re safe now.
Ha, you think he's learn by now -- not ever on the show and not even in fic is it ever over or are they ever safe!

Oh god, that ending.
Thank was excellent, thank you.

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minviendha November 18 2010, 02:22:09 UTC
It's like this fandom is constantly challenging me to cause characters more and more pain, it is really awful fantastic. >>

Without Dean is kind of like Before Christ, if you ask me. A little bit. It's just a pretty defining moment in terms of history, too, in SPN verse.

Hope springs eternal, or something? But yeah, you'd really think that the Things Get Worse law would be tattooed on the inside of all skulls in this 'verse, because it is pretty much universally true.

Thank you!

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gidgetgal9 November 17 2010, 22:21:51 UTC
Who this was hard to read but in a good way because you captured the angst of season four and especially the detox episode so well. It was sad but very much believible that Sam might have drank his own blood to stop the need. Great job with this! ;0)

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minviendha November 18 2010, 02:23:29 UTC
Thank you! Season four is full of juicy emotional baggage for me to sink my teeth into and make fic out of; it does make things like this relatively easy. >>

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