Guess what day it is? Comment-fic day!

May 02, 2012 10:59

Once again, it's everyone's favourite day in Supernatural: May 2nd! You know what that means, right? Time to hurt Sam! ;)

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cherry916 May 2 2012, 21:06:03 UTC
Filled: Comfortably Numb. Sam, Dean Gen Hope you like it hun.

A stupid toothbrush.

All Sam wants is a stupid toothbrush. It doesn’t matter what brand or what color, he just wants to brush his teeth. Is that too much to ask?

When he went digging around in his duffel looking for the damn thing he realized he must have left it in Oklahoma. Of course he figures he’s allowed some forgetfulness after recent events. Sam shivers and pulls his jacket closer around him as he browses through the small convenience store.

It's about 2:31 in the morning; the cold air is leeching through the poorly sealed barriers in the store making the room as cold as ice. His thin jacket is doing little in keeping him warm. Sadly though, his heavier winter coat is in the Impala.

Impala. Pain ratchets up in his heart just thinking about the muscle car. Sam shakes his head of the saddening thoughts; he doesn't want to freak out in the middle of the store. Maybe he will buy a bottle of jack to go with the toothbrush and silently grieve in his motel room ( ... )

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cherry916 May 2 2012, 21:07:26 UTC
Dean’s staring at the cash register with a look of mounting horror. Sam finally focuses on the scene and groans at seeing the man has a gun.

“Is this really happening?” Sam asks incredulously.

“Afraid so man.” Dean whispers back. Sam watches Dean's reactions to gage what to do next, despite not seeing each other for a while Sam is still tuned into Dean's cues.

“Stay low and come on.” Dean whispers harshly, ducking behind the shelves and dragging Sam along with him. Sam follows behind Dean planning to back him up on whatever he decides to do.

Dean's boot scuffs the linoleum floor which draws the gunman’s attention away from the shaken man at the counter to Sam and Dean trying to surprise him from his blind side.

“Hey!” The gunman screams swinging his gun in their direction. At Dean.Sam doesn’t even need to think, he just knows if one of them is dying tonight, it sure as hell isn’t going to be Dean. Sam pushes his brother out of the way and winces as Dean's head connects with the ground harshly. Within seconds Sam feels a force ( ... )

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cherry916 May 2 2012, 21:11:17 UTC
Sam wakes to odd smells and sounds. He is feeling pleasantly numb until he attempts to open his eyes. The lights pierce through his sore eyes and make him immediately close them with a wince.

“Easy man. Take it easy.”

Dean?

“You should be feeling nice and high right now. They pumped you full of the good stuff man.”

Good stuff? Sam really wants someone to explain what the hell is going on. “D'n?”

“I'm here Sam.” Sam feels the bed shift under him as a heavy weight settles on his left side. It makes him feel good inside, knowing that Dean isn't mad enough to leave Sam in the hospital alone. It's more than he feels he has the right to ask for.

“What the hell were you thinking anyway?”

I spoke too soon. Sam thinks, misery beginning to fill his heart. He hesitantly flutters open his eyes and breathes a sigh of relief at noting the light is turned off. He is scared he's going see pure hatred in his brother’s eyes when he focuses on him, maybe even disgust or worse of all disappointment. But all he sees in Dean's deep green eyes is ( ... )

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klutzy_girl May 2 2012, 21:16:21 UTC
Thank you so much! I loved it. Exactly what I wanted!

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cherry916 May 2 2012, 21:17:54 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it.

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cowboyguy May 2 2012, 21:36:56 UTC
Ohmigod, the "Don't cry, Sammy" is what got me. And then Dean sitting on the hospital bed with Sam. And-- and-- just perfect.

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cherry916 May 2 2012, 21:40:59 UTC
Yay! So glad you liked it.

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familybizness May 2 2012, 21:47:23 UTC
It was like OH. A BEAUTIFUL PROMPT

OH. SOMEONE CLAIMED IT

OHITHASBEENFILLED!!!!!

you have made me so happy.

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cherry916 May 2 2012, 21:48:58 UTC
Haha glad I could :)

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big_heart_june May 3 2012, 09:00:17 UTC
Lovely. ♥

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cherry916 May 3 2012, 14:02:08 UTC
Thanks :)

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firesign10 May 5 2012, 21:34:28 UTC
OMG this made me start tearing up!! Poor Sam, but yay for things looking hopeful at the end. Nicely done!

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cherry916 May 5 2012, 21:36:24 UTC
Thanks!

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glimmerella May 6 2012, 03:33:14 UTC
<3 !!!

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cherry916 May 6 2012, 17:58:23 UTC
;D

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mentholpixie May 6 2012, 04:45:43 UTC
Nice work, hun :)

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