I found this while I was surfing the Internet. I facepalmed when I found. I just need to MST this. Obviously, the article doesn't belong me, because I wouldn't write something so filled with fail. As usual, the original text is in red and my coments are in black.

( This is so fail I don't even know where to begin )

Here's the next part.  Sorry that it took so long!

"Hi I'm Canada" he said with a small smile, Australia greeted him with a hug, his smile grew bigger and all the other countries stared with jealousy.

Well, I can see Australia being friendly with Canada, but this is taking place in modern times.  Australia should already be familiar with Canada.

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Hi there everyone!  This is my first journal entry.  I mostly plan to use this journal for rants, MSTs and commenting.  Inspired by all of the MSTs out there, as well as Pottersues, I plan to do MSTs of both fanfiction and original fiction.  I will credit the authors, since none of these stories are mine, and I will not tell the author that their ( Read more... )