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springtides in oh_whereupon

home is where the heart is

Jul 25, 2009 09:02

Title: home is where the heart is
Genre: country, cars, craving.
Rating: pg13
Pairing: yunjae
Summary: Sometime later, Yunho stops the car in the middle of nowhere, leaves the engine running as he leans over and kisses Jaejoong like it’s something they’ve both been waiting for, and they could have been.
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( Jaejoong’s the dreamer between them, the one to suggest that there’s an answer for speed versus gravity, the one to fill in the spaces on these kinds of days, with enough left over to breathe. )

dbsk, yunjae

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emda July 25 2009, 00:37:06 UTC

really beautiful and very different from the usual. Like the flow of this story!
Well done!!

springtides July 25 2009, 04:31:05 UTC

thank you ♥ i'm glad you liked it.

umai_jae_ai July 25 2009, 04:04:26 UTC

SO FREAKING BEAUTIFUL!!!! This was written so well. And you totally almost had me in tears at the end there(i held them back so hard! lol) But I'm really glad that you gave them hope at the end.

I loved this and I'm definitely adding it to my memories! <333

springtides July 25 2009, 04:32:10 UTC

i feel oddly happy that i almost made you cry xD i was considering which way to go with the ending, but i'm glad you like the one i chose.

thank you for the mem! ♥

livesmiling July 25 2009, 08:30:59 UTC

this is really interesting :)

brilliant bb <3

springtides July 25 2009, 23:11:26 UTC

thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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springtides July 25 2009, 23:11:03 UTC

you have no idea how happy this comment makes me. i'm really so glad you liked it ♥ sorry this took a while, i was being fiddly with style and plot.

i'm also glad you liked that paragraph! thanks so much ♥ ily too.

FML reverser here! :D

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springtides July 31 2009, 09:00:31 UTC

the stories are just so amazing and heartwarming. ♥

daemon_angelus July 26 2009, 18:32:10 UTC

brilliant. BRILLIANT. /applauds ;_;

This is how Jaejoong ends up in Yunho’s car, either in what could have been a premeditated mistake or two people coming together like the wrong ends of a magnet: different enough that if you push them apart they’ll pull back into each other, and enough that if you turned either boy around, they’d be the same boys, and one could walk past and the other would keep walking.

genius words right here. (i'll remember them for a long, long time)

i love how you portrayed jaejoong too, the whole i'm-too-different-for-you-and-your-world spunk xD

bittersweet but the possibility of it all, especially at the end, makes it so endearing and remarkable :') that they can even, maybe, transcend time (together).

MEMMING BECAUSE IT DESERVES TO BE.♥

springtides July 27 2009, 09:57:08 UTC

thank you!

ahaha i'm glad you like that part. i wrote it on my cellphone at a buffet dinner.

jaejoong always came across to me as a special kind of boy ♥

thanks for the mem!