Breaking

[off_suit]

Part I: Upside Down... Again

Sequal to Upside Down... Again
This one is a little more angsty (and not quite as well written, sorry)

Part II: Breaking

He wasn’t a snoop. For all Owen’s teasing and Gwen’s raised eyebrows he didn’t deliberately go around trying to find things out about other people’s personal lives. He liked his own to be kept private

Comments

[jo02]

Oh No - you can't stop there!

I like the twist in these.

[nightporters]

So you heard me shouting at the tv last night?

[off_suit]

You wanted to slap Jack for that bit too huh?

[nightporters]

I wanted to apply a taser to his bollocks!

[off_suit]

Hahaha!!!
Aww but poor Ianto. :(
If my morbid muse doesn't take over Mr Jack will get a swift kick in the butt (if I end up continuing this fic and don't just write another).

[daughterofelros]

Lovely-- hard to believe this is your first TW fic!

just one question-- I stumbled a bit on this line

"wanted still wanted "

Is there supposed to be some bit of punctuation there that gone missing or some such?

[off_suit]

Blegh!
No there's not supposed to be any punctuation in there, the first "wanted" isn't supposed to be there at all.
The curses of beta'ing yourself.
Thank you :)