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The End Of The Beginning XXI

Aug 15, 2009 16:51

Title: The End Of The Beginning
Part: XXI
Title: When small things grow
Pairing: Xander/Spike (eventually)
Overall Rating: NC17
Chapter Rating: PG13
Beta: The great ( Read more... )

x/s, spike/xander, spander, the end of the beginning, xander/spike, s/x

Comments 25

novalinx August 15 2009, 19:31:24 UTC

Wonderful.

I'm glad Dawn realized how much Xander was doing for her. It mad me very happy that she thanked him for it.

Although I found the line: "It feels like home there, Xander," painful. It was like she never considered her home with Xander anything more than a place to keep some of her stuff. I can see Xander focusing on that part, not on the parts where she knows he's doing everything he can ( ... )

off_suit August 30 2009, 07:28:18 UTC

I'm really glad you picked up on the "it feels like home line". To be honest I thought if anyone did it would be you. And I think the angst fairy came out for a bit there, I couldn't resist.

As for the Book One, Book Two deal I thought about that for a long while, hell I have it organised on my computer like that, but I think it kind of works better as one long story - at least the way LJ is set up - however the distinction between this and the next chapter is pretty great (especially with the AN's).

Anyway, thank you for yet another wonderful comment that made me smile, and next chapter's up. =]

bewitch_you August 15 2009, 21:14:36 UTC

yey.... home huh ;-) but... it's To expencive two houses... and all.... but Dawny'd grow up first then... who knows, she could come back... and it's sweeet, the update befor i travel back to home yupi iei :-) thanks

RYL

off_suit August 30 2009, 07:29:10 UTC

Expensive yeah, but you know Xander; there was no way he was going to force Dawn into anything. I'm glad you're liking it. =]

hrfrdbcc August 15 2009, 23:15:11 UTC

I would love if you continue this very well written story. I also understand if your muse tells you its over.

off_suit August 30 2009, 07:29:25 UTC

Thanks for the encouragement =]

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off_suit August 30 2009, 07:30:50 UTC

It's always nice to know that people enjoy it, especially when the whole twenty something chapters came out of a plot bunny while watching a sci-fi show rerun =D

But the muse has spoken, and it looks like I'm in it for the long haul. Hope you like reading, and I don't bore you.

devo79 August 16 2009, 16:34:58 UTC

YAY! Finally managed to get all the chapters read.
*Sighs happily* I love this and if you decide to end it here it would be a very beautiful ending, indeed.

off_suit August 30 2009, 07:31:43 UTC

Aww well I'm glad you managed to catch up, and that you like it. I kind of wanted to end it, but the muse has other ideas, so away I go *g*