A STORY ABOUT CASTLES

[octavian_trex]

SO LAST WEEK halfshellvenus SAID THAT MAYBE I SHOULD USE MORE COMMAS. SO IN THIS ENTRY I SHALL ENDEAVOR TO USE COMMAS, MORE.

THIS WEEK'S TOPIC IS NO PROBLEM AT ALL FOR ME. AS A TIME-TRAVELING WIZARD WHO IS ALSO A T-REX, I HAVE BEEN TO MANY CASTLES. MOST OF THEM ARE FROM THE PAST, BECAUSE THE PAST IS WHERE MOST PEOPLE KEEP THEIR CASTLES.

THE INCREDIBLE AND

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[basric]

Cute entry

[octavian_trex]

THANK YOU.

[elledanger]

Your entries are fast becoming something I look forward to reading. I hope you and Sissyfacebelle are very happy in your past-future-present home filled with castle relics and thrones and also coffee.

[octavian_trex]

I AM VERY GLAD TO KNOW THAT YOU LIKE MY WRITING. WE HAVE A LOT OF FUN HANGING OUT IN OLD CASTLES.

[halfshellvenus]

MOST OF THEM ARE FROM THE PAST, BECAUSE THE PAST IS WHERE MOST PEOPLE KEEP THEIR CASTLES.

Hahahaha!

I SEE YOU USED THE COMMAS. LOTS OF THEM. SOMETIMES RANDOMLY. THAT IS ALSO A THING.

[octavian_trex]

I REALLY APPRECIATE THE ADVICE, I THINK IT WILL HELP MY WRITING, A LOT.

[whipchick]

OMG you make me laugh and laugh. And each week I have thought, "Huh, wonder how long this will stay this funny," and so far the answer is FOR,EVER.

[octavian_trex]

THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'M GLAD YOU FOUND MY BUTT STORY FUNNY. SISSYFACEBELLE AND I FOUND IT PRETTY FUNNY, TOO.

[witchwife]

IT IS LIKE SITTING ON THE PAST AND THE PRESENT AND THE FUTURE ALL AT ONCE.

I feel like you could have used more commas here. ;)

[octavian_trex]

OH, THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK. I WILL SHOOT FOR MORE COMMAS, NEXT TIME.