[fic post] Forgotten

[oceansex]

Title: Forgotten
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Angst/Romance
Pairings or Characters: Axel/Roxas, Organization 13 members
Warnings: AU with scenes in canonverse, slight emotional abuse, dude on dude action
Word Count: 1,542
Summary: It doesn't hurt to be called a nobody because he knows it's true.
Author Notes: Happy AkuRoku Day, Friday the 13th and all that

Comments

[roterstern]

This was lovely. I loved how Roxas hadn't really felt anything in all his life and come Axel, it's the first time he does. The comparison between this AU and canon, the use of "nobody" is nicely done.

Memorizing ♥

[oceansex]

thank you very much! happy you liked all the bits I tossed in there. ;)

[synchroshatter]

This is really beautiful- I love how the first and last sections mirror each other, with the slight twist at the end as well. And I really like how you write Roxas's reactions in his first relationship, how he kind of seems stuck in a rut that's bad but not unbearable, because I think you captured it really realistically. Love it! ^-^

[oceansex]

glad to hear it! C:

[aibari]

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♥

[oceansex]

fffffffffff

♥♥♥

[redglare]

IF ONLY YOU COULD SEE ME RIGHT NOW.

I AM LITERALLY JUMPING UP AND DOWN WITH HAPPINESS.

[oceansex]

I CAN SEE YOU, DON'T WORRY.........

DLKFSFJL THANK YOU BB ////