[fic post] There's a Shadow, You Can't See My Eyes

May 26, 2010 02:51

Title: There's a Shadow, You Can't See My Eyes
Rating: G
Genre: Gen/Romance
Pairings or Characters: Faye/Spike
Warnings: none
Word Count: 294
Summary: This was a well-deserved vacation.
Author Notes: For the fayeandspike drabble challenge, "here come the girls," based on the song "Folding Chair" by Regina Spektor. Of course, this being me, I had to toss some ( Read more... )

pairing -- spike/faye, cowboy bebop, !fic, rating -- [g], contest entry

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shmobeline May 26 2010, 11:39:02 UTC
I don't often read Bebop fic, but since it was by you... ^^

I have to say, you write Spike and Faye pretty excellently. Your style is great, too. Minimal, which I s'pose comes from it being a drabble, but it fits well with the style of the show, too. Awesome job, if you ask me. :)

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oceansex May 27 2010, 00:31:58 UTC
haha, I don't either ;;

thank you very much! <3 this was originally twice as long, but then I remembered there was a word count limit and started snipping away most of the descriptions until it was mostly dialogue. XD

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rampant_chaos8 May 26 2010, 14:27:56 UTC
Aw, that made me smile <3 Great job, and I love your Spike and Faye :)

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oceansex May 27 2010, 00:32:19 UTC
thank you! I'm glad you like how I handled them! :)

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skinnieminnie27 May 26 2010, 17:36:07 UTC
I agree. It's minimal but it goes in tune with the show. I like it =)

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skinnieminnie27 May 26 2010, 17:36:53 UTC
p.s. Shipping of SpikexFaye is encouraged!

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oceansex May 27 2010, 00:32:43 UTC
lol glad to hear it! XD

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oceansex May 27 2010, 00:32:31 UTC
thank you very much! C:

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oceansex May 27 2010, 00:33:15 UTC
thanks! can't wait for the other entries~ :)

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rosehiptea May 26 2010, 22:29:34 UTC
Definitely IC. I love how cynical Spike is, even when Faye is trying, just a little, to be open.

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oceansex May 27 2010, 00:33:28 UTC
glad to hear it! ^_^

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