Fic: Friday Night, Late (R)

[obstinatrix]

Title: Friday Night, Late
Pairing: Shatnoy
Rating: R
Disclaimer: liiiiiiiiiies!
Summary: Leonard arrives at Bill's apartment, rained on. They have sex. Wow, what a plot.

Comments

[ema_load]

oh, i loved this. you made my crappy afternoon all better.

and i like your icon!

[obstinatrix]

Writing this at work made my crappy afternoon better, too, so I'm glad it performed dual functions. :D

[lemon31]

Beautifully written as always ♥

The last line made me laugh out loud! Nice bit of humour to make up for the angst.

Unlike Leonards, they actually do grow on trees.

[obstinatrix]

*grins* Thank you, hon.

[candesgirl]

No one writes them like you do. No one. It's fucking brilliant and hot and always has this tinge of desperation and sadness that is absofuckinglutely perfect. Gah, I love it and you for writing it. Well, I love you anyway, actually, this just makes it that much better, I get to fangirl you.

Damn.

[obstinatrix]

I love you tooooo, comm daddy, but you know that. :) Thank you. I was feeling the need for them, recently. The world needs more Shatnoy porn, and they were doing this in my head today at work so I thought I might as well write it down, while it was there!

[starcrossedgirl]

ASjshdkfhjd, I have already told you how incoherent this makes me, but yes. I love the desperate edge it has to it, at the start, and then the mellowing out throughout, and wet clothes have never been this weirdly attractive.

Also, I've started noted a pattern wherein somehow you manage to turn the moments right after the sex even hotter than the sex itself, or the lead up? I don't know how you manage it, but this sentence: "Again," says Leonard, "and again, if I say so. Hmm?" makes my heart explode with joy and UNF.

[starcrossedgirl]

noting a pattern, damnit. WHERE IS MY EDIT BUTTON.

[obstinatrix]

IT DESERTED YOU, BB. <333333

[obstinatrix]

Well, as I was saying last night, I love the after-sex parts; I frequently end up with some kind of morning after in my fics, or post-sex banter, or something like that, because I often find it frustrating when the fic just - cuts. I mean, what happened then? Where is my snuggling, dammit? ;) So, thank you, I am delighted that you like those parts too.

And, yes, I couldn't resist the little suggestions of dom!Len, I hold my hands up there. Unnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnf, never enough.

[illariy]

Oh, lovely. I like the mix of hotness and sadness, that there's still something they can't have. *happy sigh*

[obstinatrix]

Thank you!

God, yes, there's always something good about illicitness, isn't there?