"enemies", 42/100

[obiwan100]

Title: Apprentice.
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Obi-Wan Kenobi
Prompt: 22. Enemies.
Word Count: 303.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: Vader is dead; Obi-Wan is captured and taken back to his Master.
Author's Note: Weird RotS-ish AU. I have no idea, I'm just procrastinating on finals-related things. The Quin handpr0n is coming, I promise, it's just that my

Comments

[lumy12]

Wooooo hate sex!

Lovely.

[sanestlunatic]

Heh, thanks. I would've written more, but my inner Palpatine thinks that things like raping people with lightsaber hilts is entirely acceptable. Needless to say, he and my inner Obi don't get along too well.

[lumy12]

At least your inner Palpatine more closely resembles canon than mine. >.>

[sanestlunatic]

Yeah, I think he's somewhere between yours and Rayvenne's. I only wish mine was as cool as hers.

[hlglne]

for Quin hatesex, try mine, http://community.livejournal.com/quinlanvos100/ "Watch It". But handporn is better because he has lovin' hands.

The stump fetish is awesome. I approve.

[torinosu]

This was scary as hell! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

[prismgecko]

Holy crap! @_@ That was awesome. I don't remember how I found your fics, but I'm glad I did. :3 It was just chilling - I swear, Obi-Wan gone to evil would be one of the scariest things the galaxy ever saw.

[sanestlunatic]

Thanks! One of these days - i.e., once I learn how to properly plot things out and take time writing them - I swear I'm going to do an evil!Obi AU. Mmmm, evil.

[prismgecko]

I know you'll do a good job! ^_^b You totally should write it. >_>; I'd draw fanart for it! :3

I think evil!Obi is one of my favorite things to look for on the internet. Just thinking about what could possibly drive such a paragon of Jedi integrity to the dark side is intriguing. (I'm sure lots of angst is involved.)
I've had an idea for a while that deals with the subject. I haven't started it though...grammatically, my writing is very sound, but I don't excel at character development so I struggle with fiction. ;_; I think you did a good job, here, of characterizing both characters with minimal word usage.

[coolcia]

It's just great! I never thought about plot like that and it's just geniously for long story!