What You Wished For (Dollhouse One-Shot)

[obiwahn]

Title: What You Wished For
Author: obiwahn 
Pairing/Characters: Paul/Echo
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual situations, violence, character death.
Spoilers: None really. Based very loosely on the promotional pics for Man on the Street.
Disclaimer: Joss is Boss. I own nothing, just playing.
Word Count: 1,203
A/N: Written for dollhousefics  challenge 003 : Box

Comments

[impact_velocity]

man, this is creepy, and sad, and fantastic! nice job!

[obiwahn]

Thanks :-) Yes, it's pretty dark.

[define_serenity]

Oh this is awesome!

[obiwahn]

Thanks! I was a bit worried about the reception this would get. Heh.

[define_serenity]

No really, I love how you described Paul's obsession, and I see the Dollhouse very capable of sending Echo after him. And the smut is just HOT!

[obiwahn]

Yes, I think that the Dollhouse will eventually send her after him...it's just too good not to happen, and perfectly Jossian in its twistedness :-P

And the smut is just HOT!

Hee! Thanks! I've just recently been delving into the smuttier side of fanfic, haha (well writing it at least ;-) I wasn't sure if this would be an R or an NC-17. I am terrible at ratings!

[mister_pointy99]

Oh, God. What a great idea!

The story is creepy - in a good way.

[obiwahn]

Thanks! :-)

[mister_pointy99]

If you're interested (and don't mind spoilers) I can send you the script of the unaired pilot where something similar happened - Jossian way.

[obiwahn]

OMG, I would love that!!! Even though I know it will break my heart that it didn't get aired *shakes fist a FOX*

-smoochies-

[girly_scribbles]

Loving your writing as always.

SMUT-LOVER!!

[obiwahn]

LOL. You knows it :-P

xx

[maureen]

How dark... and in that well done kind of way. You are just so talented, lady!

[obiwahn]

Aww, thankies :-D