What You Wished For (Dollhouse One-Shot)

[obiwahn]

Title: What You Wished For
Author: obiwahn 
Pairing/Characters: Paul/Echo
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual situations, violence, character death.
Spoilers: None really. Based very loosely on the promotional pics for Man on the Street.
Disclaimer: Joss is Boss. I own nothing, just playing.
Word Count: 1,203
A/N: Written for dollhousefics  challenge 003 : Box

Comments

[lavastar]

Ooo, squicky. I rather like the idea of Paul kind of being a creeper, and the twist where she wasn't actually Caroline, and then her slight sentimentality at the end.

Great job!

[obiwahn]

Paul is kind of unstable if you ask me, haha.

Thanks for reading :-)

[force_oblique]

Wow this was marvelous!
I really enjoyed reading it! :)
And the amount of angst and the sexual tension and the description...Fantastic!

[obiwahn]

Aww, thank you so much! :-)

[efnisien]

Oh, that hit hard. Not a victim--such irony.

[obiwahn]

Thank you, yes, irony is the spice of fic :-P

[snowpuppies]

Great job.

I love how this played out - and it really feels like something the Dollhouse execs would cook up to get Paul off their backs.

And the end...*sniffles*

[obiwahn]

Thankies :-)

[emmademarais]

Oh my! Creepy and dramatic and oddly sexy with an ending that kind of stabs *us* in the chest. Ow! Quite the ambitious tale! I'm sure you won't hold it against me if I say I hope it doesn't go like this on the show, but for fic? I really enjoyed this read. It really shook me out of complaceny - in the best possible way.

Thanks for posting!

[obiwahn]

Sorry to stab! ;-)

I'm sure you won't hold it against me if I say I hope it doesn't go like this on the show, but for fic? I really enjoyed this read.

Don't worry, I don't hold it against you, haha. I just hope you don't hold it against Joss if he does it, lol! He is the master of pain.

It really shook me out of complaceny - in the best possible way.

Aww, thanks so much! xx