Comments | nyx_kendaya: Loyalties: Skewed Promises

kendayawind in nyx_kendaya

Loyalties: Skewed Promises

Apr 20, 2012 18:28

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: YunJae/Jaeho
Genre: AU!Drama, Romance, Minor!Angst
Summary: All he could see were the flaws, the wrongs done and those who overlooked him. He closed his eyes from the world that turned against him. All the while, a hand reached out silently and timidly towards him, protecting him from the obscene.
Warning: Mentions/alluding ( Read more... )

pairing: yunjae/jaeho, fic♠au: loyalties, type: fanfiction, type: yaoi

Comments 24

kendayawind April 21 2012, 02:08:12 UTC

Lien's Spot!

mitsui_tsuru April 21 2012, 10:29:06 UTC

its a really good story ^___^
Its a bit sad what Yun had to deal before he meet Jae, and how Jae left Yun to take all those alone T____T but now Jae have also make him change and become him self,
Yun mother *grumbling* she better not thinking of doing anything to Yun or she wont be dealing with Jae only
And there is JunSu here, LOL somehow JunSu is my fav character here XDD

kendayawind April 24 2012, 07:24:39 UTC

Jaejoong did have to grow a bit, become someone who wouldn't take anyone's stuff. Yunho's mother is just that... Gah, such a case! xD My friend loved Junsu as well, not too sure what to think of that ^^;

Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for commenting~! ^^

dilovesyunjae April 21 2012, 10:57:53 UTC

wow.

kendayawind April 24 2012, 07:25:04 UTC

Hoping that's a good sign, thank you for commenting!

keijirou April 21 2012, 14:20:03 UTC

Wow, this is a beautiful story. So heartwarming <3

keijirou April 21 2012, 14:21:53 UTC

Oh, I added you as friend, I hope you don't mind :)

kendayawind April 24 2012, 07:26:26 UTC

Happy you thought so :) And no problem, don't mind at all and added you back as well ^^.

Thank you for commenting~! ^-^

ultamatempa April 21 2012, 16:31:35 UTC

it's incredibly sad someone could do that to their own child. i'm glad that jae was able to remove him from that abusive situation and let him grow to be the person he wanted. it'd be difficult to ever be out in that time period, but as long as they have each other, they'll be just fine :)

kendayawind April 26 2012, 03:20:31 UTC

It really is, and knowing them personally and acting as if nothing's wrong just enrages me to no end ><.

Yunho can finally have his own say for once as well. That time period things were just being learned, but at least it was progressing ^^; They definitely will be :)

Thank you for taking the time to comment~! ^-^