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Drowning in a Sea of Grey (1/1)

Oct 25, 2009 13:29

Title: Drowing in a Sea of Grey
Author: nytel
Fandom: Dollhouse
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to and including 204 - Belonging
Characters/Pairing: Topher, Victor/Sierra
Word Count: 661
Prompt: Dollhouse, Victor/Sierra, Grey - from i_am_girlfriday
Summary: When he had first started his job, Topher had found this sort of behaviour-the complete innocence of the dolls-to be ( Read more... )

dollhouse, one shot fic, dollhouse fic, victor/sierra, fan fic

Comments 19

nebakanezer October 26 2009, 05:57:49 UTC

Oh that's gooood! This last episode really helped explore Topher's character and you'd done a great job of expanding on that. Love the visuals of the sea of grey and that he was like a doll himself before, something he would never have been able to see until now. Fascinating!

nytel October 26 2009, 12:59:57 UTC

*blushes* Thank you! I really love Topher the more we see of him. I always kind of liked him to begin with, more as almost comedic relief than anything else, but now I really just love him.

Poor Topher... *huggles him*

artemis_90 October 26 2009, 12:40:21 UTC

Sweet. I really liked how it summed up Topher growing awareness. At first I wasn't a fan of a redemptive arc for Topher, but this episode made me change my mind. I like how you got transferred Echo's waking up comment to Topher's waking up.

nytel October 26 2009, 13:01:49 UTC

Thanks! I'm really loving Topher as a character this season. Actually, with Mellie/Madeline gone he's probably my favourite. And I think he really has changed since the start of the first season, which is always so much fun to see. :)

i_am_girlfriday October 26 2009, 21:44:47 UTC

Aww poor Topher. He's really grown on me. Thanks so much for letting me see a bit more of him :)

nytel October 26 2009, 22:44:14 UTC

I love Topher. I always liked him, but recently he's started to become my favourite character.

I'm glad you liked it, even though it wasn't super Victor/Sierra shippy. *hugs*

juliet316 October 27 2009, 00:33:21 UTC

Wow, poor Topher.

PS: I love your journal header.

nytel October 28 2009, 04:03:31 UTC

I just want to hug him...

Thanks! :)

lisianpeia October 27 2009, 01:59:49 UTC

I really liked this. I think it matches with the idea the whole episode give us, like he's growing up, which means, of course, you had him quite right, in my opinion. I believe this would be his exact reaction on the days that followed those events.

The last paragraph was absolutely perfect. And I say this with some kind of experience, 'cause I've felt something more or less like that.

Very well done and written!

nytel October 28 2009, 04:05:41 UTC

Thank you! I love seeing his character grow/develop, it's been really great this season.

The last paragraph was absolutely perfect. And I say this with some kind of experience, 'cause I've felt something more or less like that
--Wow, thank you. And this makes me want to huggle you as much as I want to huggle Topher! Lol.

Thanks for reading, and for taking the time to comment. :)

lisianpeia October 28 2009, 16:27:59 UTC

No problem at all =)
Thank you!

nytel October 28 2009, 17:03:57 UTC

You're very welcome. *g*