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Drowning in a Sea of Grey (1/1)

Oct 25, 2009 13:29

Title: Drowing in a Sea of Grey
Author: nytel
Fandom: Dollhouse
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to and including 204 - Belonging
Characters/Pairing: Topher, Victor/Sierra
Word Count: 661
Prompt: Dollhouse, Victor/Sierra, Grey - from i_am_girlfriday
Summary: When he had first started his job, Topher had found this sort of behaviour-the complete innocence of the dolls-to be ( Read more... )

dollhouse, one shot fic, dollhouse fic, victor/sierra, fan fic

Comments 19

carpenyx October 27 2009, 03:57:54 UTC

I wasn't much of a fan of Topher. I could give or take him but this season has changed that and this fic, is awesomeness. :) I love how you portrayed him here, :)

nytel October 28 2009, 04:06:15 UTC

Awe, thanks sweetie! I'm definitely loving me some Topher this season. *g*

czgoldedition October 27 2009, 05:30:37 UTC

Oh man. Beautiful. Love love love the last couple paragraphs especially. Poor Topher.

nytel October 28 2009, 04:06:49 UTC

Thank you! I really do feel bad for him... *huggles Topher*

turquoisetumult October 28 2009, 14:03:03 UTC

LOVELY character insight on Topher. Wonderfully written and you really grasped at some things that I would not have picked up (Topher living like a doll before without any "morals," e.g.)

Anyway, great work!

nytel October 28 2009, 17:03:06 UTC

*blushes* Thank you! I had fun examining Topher's character a little more closely. I ♥ him so much!

Thank you, and thanks for taking the time to comment. :)

wolfenm November 29 2009, 15:01:25 UTC

When he had first started his job, Topher had found this sort of behaviour-the complete innocence of the dolls-to be utterly revolting. Now he was envious.

Lovely -- *perfect* example of how Topher's perspective had to have been utterly turned upside-down after "Belonging"!

Pst -- you have a typeo: "must needed" should be "much-needed". ;)