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Summer Nights (14/?)

Nov 23, 2008 14:10

Title: Summer Nights (14/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: NC-17 (or at least it will be)
Spoilers: Nada. It's a pre-mini AU fic.
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Romance
Summary: Neither of them had been expecting anything other than a normal summer break.
Word Count: 4,088
Beta: ez_as_pi
Disclaimer: I am merely borrowing them. No copyright infringement is intended.

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kara/lee, bsg, summer nights, bsg fic, fan fic

Comments 29

anastashial November 23 2008, 23:45:49 UTC

I keep thinking of these two as a Keystone Cops comedy and wishing they would just talk to each other! Zak certainly doesn't seen like he's going to be as clueless as Michael.

nytel November 24 2008, 05:59:44 UTC

Lol. If they would only talk... ;)

And I think you're right in assuming Zak isn't as clueless as Michael. *g*

virkatjol November 24 2008, 03:28:58 UTC

Can't wait for the next part! Things keep twisting and get more interesting! Great job! Loving it!

nytel November 24 2008, 06:00:14 UTC

Thanks! Glad to hear you're liking it. :)

tamsibling November 24 2008, 07:12:34 UTC

Oh, this is cool. I like the idea of Zak showing up and deciding not to be a pilot. However, I'm kind of dreading the end of summer, maybe even more than Kara is!

You are going to let them have some more ... smuttiness before they're time's up? Won't you?

nytel November 24 2008, 14:21:07 UTC

Thank you! I personally love Zak (even though we've seen like zilch of him in canon), so I couldn't resist a chance to include him here as well. :)

However, I'm kind of dreading the end of summer, maybe even more than Kara is!
--Lol. That's funny.

You are going to let them have some more ... smuttiness before they're time's up? Won't you?
--It won't be for a couple of chapters, but yes, there will definitely be more smutiness. ;) After all, this story is all about the sex! Lol. (Or at least a good portion of the story is...)

zommbie1 November 24 2008, 08:28:27 UTC

Wow...I did not see Zak showing up. And as others have said, Zak certainly isn't as clueless as Michael. Great chapter looking forward to the next instalment.

nytel November 24 2008, 14:22:18 UTC

*g* I think I caught a couple people off guard by throwing Zak in here. :)

Zak certainly isn't as clueless as Michael.
--And others have been right. ;)

Thanks for reading!

rdave1 November 24 2008, 16:36:14 UTC

I am so loving Zak's addition to the story. It seems that he has already picked on Lee and Kara's "relationship". Wonder if that will get those two to confront their real feeling instead of hiding behind friendship. It is good to see that the Old Man listens to Lee even though Lee doesn't think so. Zak's revelation has certainly made Lee face somethings concerning his father. And Kara's dad is coming back. This is going to get better then it already is with Dads and brothers in the mix.

Awesome job

nytel November 25 2008, 04:59:50 UTC

*g* Thanks! I'm glad to hear that. :)

It seems that he has already picked on Lee and Kara's "relationship".
--It would seem you are right...

It is good to see that the Old Man listens to Lee even though Lee doesn't think so. Zak's revelation has certainly made Lee face somethings concerning his father.
--I figured I could really go either way with this, but in the end I settled for Lee at least having the option to be on good terms with his dad some time in the future.

And Kara's dad is coming back. This is going to get better then it already is with Dads and brothers in the mix.
--That he is. :) And I'm glad you think it makes things exciting!

Thanks for reading. :D