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Summer Nights (14/?)

Nov 23, 2008 14:10

Title: Summer Nights (14/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: NC-17 (or at least it will be)
Spoilers: Nada. It's a pre-mini AU fic.
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Romance
Summary: Neither of them had been expecting anything other than a normal summer break.
Word Count: 4,088
Beta: ez_as_pi
Disclaimer: I am merely borrowing them. No copyright infringement is intended.

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kara/lee, bsg, summer nights, bsg fic, fan fic

Comments 29

elzed November 23 2008, 21:48:14 UTC

Well, talk about adding a new dimension to the story... Very interesting, and I love the way your AU is developing. Although I note you've been a little elusive with the hotness... perhaps we should have a little more next time? Sorry, I am such a shallow girl. But I am loving this, really!

nytel November 23 2008, 21:52:56 UTC

*g* Thank you! I quite like this AU as well. :) And boy do I have plans for this universe. Lol.

Yeah, I know there was no explicit sex in this chapter. I suppose I could have included it, but I had so much else going on that I didn't really want it to interupt the flow of things... There will definitely be more sex in the future though. It might not be for a couple of chapters, but it will happen. ;)

elzed November 24 2008, 05:42:28 UTC

I shall try to be patient then...

;)

shah_of_blah November 23 2008, 21:51:47 UTC

I like the addition of Zak in the story--not only will it change their group dynamic, but he is definitely not as clueless as Michael! I'm also hoping that we'll get to see some of Kara's dad maybe, given that he's coming into town soon. Anyway, great work! Keep it coming.

nytel November 23 2008, 21:54:21 UTC

Lol. Yeah, definitely not anywhere near as clueless as Michael. *g*

As for Kara's dad... you'll definitely be getting your wish. ;)

Thanks for reading!

jeebs83 November 23 2008, 22:11:51 UTC

I really love this story. :) Great chapter.

nytel November 24 2008, 05:48:33 UTC

Thank you. *g*

cattm November 23 2008, 22:15:38 UTC

Interesting that you have added Zak to the story. I'm curious about what role he will play in this. Your fic still has me riveted, and I'm looking forward to the next part.

nytel November 24 2008, 05:51:31 UTC

I've always liked Zak, so I couldn't resist adding him in here. ;)

Glad to hear the story still has your interest. :)

sunrider05 November 23 2008, 22:59:06 UTC

Thanks for the update - a great read as usual..

nytel November 24 2008, 05:51:52 UTC

You're welcome, I'm glad to hear you liked it. :)