Comments | nyaing: [fic] Shut up

himekohimura in nyaing

Apr 13, 2008 12:46

Title: Shut up
Rating: OMG UM. R? I haven't written something this explicit in years...
Pairing: Jack/Ten
Summary: The Doctor doesn't know when to shut up.
Warnings: Excessive talking (the Doctor) and excessive...pointing (Jack), PWP, comedy?
Notes: Not my first fic in the genre, but the first I'm sharing. Hopefully someone likes it?

( When he realized that he had fallen in lust with Jack, he got all panicky-like. Which made his voice squeak a lot and his brain go all weird. )

Comments 23

boulette_sud April 15 2008, 00:36:33 UTC

Sweet :)

lilithbint April 15 2008, 00:45:59 UTC

*snorfle*
I liked it a lot.

dock_leaf April 16 2008, 16:11:58 UTC

Your av has just made me snort in a very undignified fashion, scaring the cat...!

lilithbint April 17 2008, 05:30:17 UTC

heee...
they love each other really.
We know and they are just pretending not to.

lizz_112 April 15 2008, 01:29:21 UTC

Go Jack!

The Doctor does need to shut up sometimes (but ever so rarely!)

Nice fic!

joolz01 April 15 2008, 01:50:07 UTC

That's so cute! I love the Doctor like this. Go Jack! Thanks for the fic.

jadedgothchild April 15 2008, 01:50:30 UTC

Oh bravo. THat was excellent, both amusing and hot.