The Hillbilly Remix Challenge - Volatile by norgbelulah

[norgbelulah]

Remixed Author: halfshellvenus
Remixed Story: Something Like Lightning
Title: Volatile
Author: norgbelulah
Characters Boyd Crowder, Raylan Givens, Bo Crowder
Pairings: Boyd Crowder/Raylan Givens
Rating: PG-13
Word count: ~750
Spoilers: Pre-series only.
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Justified belongs to Elmore Leonard and Graham Yost.
A/N: Thanks to thornfield_girl, engage_protocol, and also someotherstorm for beta help

Comments

[afiakate]

Hot!

[norgbelulah]

Thank you.

[nigeltde]

Hell yes! You tap right into the sly scary Boydness of Boyd and I love the way you show how uniquely they fit together, how much they enjoy letting each other get away with behaviour they'd never take from anyone else :-D

[norgbelulah]

Thanks so much. I feel like the still do that on the show. Raylan would never take so much crap from anybody else in Harlan. :D

[halfshellvenus]

I loved this, especially because I didn't expect anyone to go quite so far out to the extreme edges of Boyd (though they are there, even if other people don't see them).

He is never the same, never consistent.
Yes-- Boyd was who was like lightning in the original story. Magnetic, dangerous, and always unpredictable.

Boyd thinks Raylan Givens sees more than most and he still ain’t scared. Boyd wonders what will scare him.
You can just feel the temptation of that challenge.

Boyd feels the sharp edges under Raylan’s skin as his hands roam.

This is what they were waiting for.

Whoo! God, yes. Me too.

Thank you so much for such an intriguing and irresistible remix!

[norgbelulah]

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

Oh man, your prompts were all really good. I had a hard time narrowing it down and then my muse was not cooperating, but I really am pleased with how this turned out. I'm super glad you found so much to love. :D

Thanks for participating!

[perdiccas]

Ohh this gave me chills. And I love how the mine has such a presence in this.

They see a smile like a snarl reigned in.
Perfect!

[norgbelulah]

Thank you! I'm glad. :D

[thornfield_girl]

So good and so them. <3 Dangerous and irresistible.

[norgbelulah]

:DDDD Thanks!