Bet On Me Part 4

[numbuh_009]

Title: Bet On Me
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, YeWook
Part: 4
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama, angst
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: It's been years and Donghae is still struggling with the ghosts of his past.
A/N: Sequel to Bet On It

Comments

[zaboomafoo76]

“Earth to Fishy,” a familiar voice cooed.

“Actually, it should be ocean to Fishy; he would die on land,” corrected a second voice.

“Technicalities are for engineers.”

“…”

“You’re not an engineer, Kyu.”

“Well, I could’ve been.”

lol, i love the KyuMin so much~

Kyuhyun coughed as they all piled in. “He meant your earpiece was on the entire time.”

Donghae’s jaw dropped as he registered the implication of their words. “You mean-”

“Yup,” said Sungmin starting the engine. “We heard every pant, gasp, moan…”

seriously, your Sungmin and Kyuhyun are awesome!!!

and yay for some HaeHyuk action!!! i got reeeeeally excited when i saw this notification ^^ great work, as usual :D

[numbuh_009]

Haha, my Sungmin/Kyuhyun always outshine my EunHae. Action indeed *waggles eyebrows* Thanks for the comment!

[zaboomafoo76]

lol, i think it's cause i'm just biased like that XD

but i did really, really love the EunHae! i would've ended up quoting the entirety of it if i did, so i just stuck to quoting KyuMin X3

[numbuh_009]

Urgh, spelling fail. Biased reader is biased. It's alright, when I read your KyuMin, I'll probably end up flailing over EunHae if you include them :D

[lulledbyscreams]

SPOT!!!
i have to do my homework! ;A;

[lulledbyscreams]

homework done!... well, as done as it's gonna get anyway -_-'

dude, i loved this so effin much:
“I told you he likes kinky stuff,” Kyuhyun’s muffled voice addressed someone else.
“He’s okay with handcuffs, but not voyeurism?” came Sungmin’s tiny voice.

XDD i sooo love Kyumin (or should i say Minkyu) in this!!

And the Haehyuk!! YES!!! Though i'm still not sure what this means.... does huyk forgives him now?
hmm.... *rubs chin thoughtfully* interesting. can't wait to read and find out!!!

and lol at hyuk redying his hair after hae's comment last time!!

thanks for the update! ^^

[numbuh_009]

*shoves pile of unfinished homework under bed* MinKyu FTW! Um, forgiving? Hmm...maybe, maybe not. Haha, well he has to keep up appearances, right? Thanks for reading and commenting!

[lovehyuk_suju]

SPOT PLEASE!!!!!^^

[lovehyuk_suju]

OMG!! so i'm smiling like an idiot right now and my brother is staring at me...
anyway!!! i loved this so much!!!
your Kyumin/Minkyu has got to be the best thing on the planet!! like seriously i just love their conversations!!
HOLY SHISUS!! HAEHYUK INTERACTION FTW!!! MUWAHAHA~~!! XD
sorry... kinda excited...
hehe~ Min and Kyu heard everything~~ (and they're back with the kinky thing again^^)
I WANNA KNOW HAE'S PLAN!!!!
thank you so much for updating!! <3

[numbuh_009]

Haha, my MinKyu tends to outshine my EunHae in my EunHae fics *kicks them* HaeHyuk finally interacting! They are kinky kids. Thank you for reading!

[marie_gable]

spot!!!!

[marie_gable]

hahaha hyuk seemed really needy when he finally got donghae all to himself...
omo i was so surprised when ryeowook said that hyuk would always bet on donghae's fights (i found that oddly comforting)
hmm really excited to see what hae's plan is!!!!
thanks for updating XD

[numbuh_009]

I'll leave it up to you to decide about Eunhyuk's motivations :3 Haha, not so much of a plan as winging it...Thank you for the comment!

[hxcangel92]

Mine~ XD

[hxcangel92]

Favoriteee: Kyuhyun raised his eyebrow. “Handcuffing you to the bed naked wasn’t the last word?”

Haehyuk finally got to have a special moment together ;D

too bad Min and Kyu had to listen to it or is it really too bad? O.o

thanks sooo much for updating! I really needed something good to read tonight and this was perfect! ^.^

<<<333

[numbuh_009]

Snarky magnae strikes again. Not too bad since MinKyu had their "special moment" too >:D Thanks for reading and commenting!