Bet On Me Part 4

Mar 21, 2011 16:13


Title: Bet On Me
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, YeWook
Part: 4
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama, angst
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: It's been years and Donghae is still struggling with the ghosts of his past.
A/N: Sequel to Bet On It

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fanfiction, rating: r, fandom: super junior, pairing: haehyuk

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tees2mai March 21 2011, 23:54:04 UTC
KEJFDKLSFKLJKDS /ALL OVER THIS.

THEY SLEPT TOGETHER. KYUMIN HEARD. OH HOW GLORIOUS. AND HYUKJAE WAS ALWAYS WATCHING OVER HAE AND BETTING ON HIM <3 HE KNEW HIS MAN WOULS WIN.
;__________________;

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numbuh_009 March 22 2011, 01:31:53 UTC
Love flying all over in the parking lot! Hyukjae has (some) faith in Donghae! Thank you for the comment!

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numbuh_009 March 22 2011, 01:33:22 UTC
I prefer making love since they did not exactly make up, haha. Kinky MinKyu FTW! Thank you for reading!

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rayneweather March 22 2011, 00:29:48 UTC
Awesome "reunion" between Eunhyuk and Donghae. Eunhyuk was obviously prepared; he knew Donghae would follow after him. He totally set that entire thing up. I bet he got a kick out of Hae still having his ear piece in and knowing that somebody out there was probably listening in.

Ryeowook is so awesome, Donghae really should get to know him better. He must patch up a lot of the fighters, or did something in the medical field before becoming a bartender, because he seems really handy when it comes to that sort of thing. I wonder how he knew where Kyuhyun & Sungmin live, though. Maybe they (Yesung & Ryeowook) know much more about Donghae than they let on.

I did love Donghae's line to Eunhyuk saying that he didn't betray Eunhyuk. And it is true, he never told the others about Eunhyuk and Heechul. Although now the cat's out of the bag. I'm interested to see what Donghae's plan is going to be. If he is going to try and lure Eunhyuk in he's going to have to make the deal very sweet in order for Hyuk to ignore the risk.

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numbuh_009 March 22 2011, 01:45:49 UTC
Haha, once again, you've hit all the points (and some I haven't even thought about, actually). Eunhyuk was prepared, but I don't know if he knew if Donghae had an earpiece. I imagine Ryeowook to be Yesung's right hand man, aka the guy who knows how to do anything and everything. As to how Yesung knew where MinKyu live, well, he has...connections. YeWook actually has an interesting backstory...one I have only half-formed at the moment ;_; *goes back to patch holes in story with tape* YES! YES! I was waiting for someone to point that out, that Donghae didn't actually betray Eunhyuk. Your last sentence is essentially what the last part is going to be about more or less. Haha, sorry, got a little rambly in this comment. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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rayneweather March 22 2011, 18:24:12 UTC
I would so love to read a backstory on YeWook. The two of them are just such awesome people to begin with. It's MinKyu and not KyuMin??!!! *squeals and runs around in joy* Sorry, I so love top!Min. Don't worry about rambling, I often do that in my comments as well.

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numbuh_009 March 22 2011, 23:00:54 UTC
I've been thinking about their backstory even before I finished writing this, but it still has yet to come to fruitation TT_TT Yup! I never write top!Kyu since I'm so top!Min biased. There needs to be more top!Min in the world~!

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likeslikingyou March 22 2011, 00:52:57 UTC
THE UPDATE I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR!!!!! THANK YOU <333
though hyuk did that to hae last chapter, at least I've learned in this chapter that he's always there for hae, i mean always betting for him <333

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numbuh_009 March 22 2011, 01:47:08 UTC
Hehe, thank you for reading and commenting!

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ryuutsuki March 22 2011, 01:09:08 UTC
Ohh~ so Eunhyuk bets only on Donghae *-*
And HOMG, Voyeur!KyuMin xD
S'too bad Hyuk doesn't stay around long enough but it made things interesting 8D;
Hope you update soon~

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numbuh_009 March 22 2011, 01:48:15 UTC
Ho hum, the implications, eh? MinKyu and their kinks...Thank you for reading!

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