Bet On Me Part 2

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Title: Bet On Me
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, YeWook
Part: 2
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama, angst
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: It's been years and Donghae is still struggling with the ghosts of his past.
A/N: Sequel to Bet On It

Comments

[zaboomafoo76]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! UPDATE!! *glomps*

Kyuhyun cast Donghae one last suspicious glance before ripping the packaging apart. He let out a very un-Kyuhyun-like squeak when he saw the contents. “The new game I’ve been wanting!” Kyuhyun turned to Donghae, eyes shining. “If Sungmin wouldn’t beat me up, I could kiss you right now.”

lol that's hilarious XDDD

“No ‘but’s, Kyuhyun,” said Sungmin sternly. Then he smirked mischievously. “Unless it’s yours.” He pressed their floor number and the doors closed with a ding.

Kyuhyun’s ears turned pink, but he persisted. “You know I can’t live without Starcraft. It’s my life!” he growled. “How could you confiscate my laptop for a month? I’ll die of boredom!” The elevator reached its destination and the three walked out.

i love how you write Sungmin in this! :D

“Oh, no need to leave,” Sungmin said reassuringly. “We’ve always wanted to see how much kinkier it is with a voyeur

[numbuh_009]

*glomps you back* Another example of those two stealing the spotlight in my fics eh? Sungmin is awesome like that \o/ Okay, hold on *goes to shoot one of the chickens*

[zaboomafoo76]

don't get me wrong, i sill love Donghae and Hyukjae!! but haha, biased reader is biased :D
I LOVE HOW YOU MAKE SUNGMIN THE TOP IN THIS!!
*cough* that probably sounds weird, huh? well, ahm, yes, i'm glad you don't make him overly-cute!

fried chicken~~

[numbuh_009]

*pets EunHae* I love top!Min like you wouldn't believe! Unfortunately, I seem to be in the minority. KyuMin is my second fave pairing, but the reason I don't read much of it is because I have a huge issue with Sungmin's characterization in most fics (he may be cute, but he's still a man yo). Watch out for bullets when eating. I got a little trigger happy.

[tees2mai]

LOLOLOL UR NEIGHBOURS HAVE CHICKEN. LOL OKAY IM GAME FOR CHICKEN

[numbuh_009]

It's odd considering I live nowhere near any farms. Okay *goes to shoot another chicken because believe me, there are plenty to go around*

[lovehyuk_suju]

SPOT!! please^^

[lovehyuk_suju]

okay sorry my computer died and i was on my phone....
so um yay!! an update!! ya know, i was actually thinking about this story earlier today and was wondering when you were going to update...weird huh?^^
so anyway Sungmin and Kyuhyun are still the best!! XD haha~ Sungmin and his kinky ideas and Kyu's obsession with video games <3
hmm...i wonder who Hae saw at the end....i know who i hope it was...^^
yay! i get more and more excited with each update!! thanks!!!
and oh yeah. i'd like some fried chicken too~~

[numbuh_009]

Oh, gosh that's terrible. I don't know what I'd do without my computer. Hope it comes back to life soon (zombie computer!). Your brain waves are evidently influencing me *puts on tin foil hat* Sungmin and Kyuhyun are awesomeness personified. ;) *hands you a headless chicken* It's fresh! Thank you for the comment!

[numbuh_009]

Hehe, your comments make me happy. Here's to hoping the chickens die from a heat stroke. Thank you for reading!

[shu_ki]

:D :D :D
lols, I really like the funny moments when Sungmin suggests kinky stuff. hehehe and Kyuhyun's obsession with starcraft, always the same no matter what. I can't wait for the next part~ :D :D Thank you for sharing~

[numbuh_009]

There's Sungmin and Kyuhyun stealing the spotlight in my EunHae fics again. Thank you for the comment!