Bet On Me Part 2

[numbuh_009]

Title: Bet On Me
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, YeWook
Part: 2
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama, angst
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: It's been years and Donghae is still struggling with the ghosts of his past.
A/N: Sequel to Bet On It

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[zaboomafoo76]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! UPDATE!! *glomps*

Kyuhyun cast Donghae one last suspicious glance before ripping the packaging apart. He let out a very un-Kyuhyun-like squeak when he saw the contents. “The new game I’ve been wanting!” Kyuhyun turned to Donghae, eyes shining. “If Sungmin wouldn’t beat me up, I could kiss you right now.”

lol that's hilarious XDDD

“No ‘but’s, Kyuhyun,” said Sungmin sternly. Then he smirked mischievously. “Unless it’s yours.” He pressed their floor number and the doors closed with a ding.

Kyuhyun’s ears turned pink, but he persisted. “You know I can’t live without Starcraft. It’s my life!” he growled. “How could you confiscate my laptop for a month? I’ll die of boredom!” The elevator reached its destination and the three walked out.

i love how you write Sungmin in this! :D

“Oh, no need to leave,” Sungmin said reassuringly. “We’ve always wanted to see how much kinkier it is with a voyeur

[numbuh_009]

*glomps you back* Another example of those two stealing the spotlight in my fics eh? Sungmin is awesome like that \o/ Okay, hold on *goes to shoot one of the chickens*

[zaboomafoo76]

don't get me wrong, i sill love Donghae and Hyukjae!! but haha, biased reader is biased :D
I LOVE HOW YOU MAKE SUNGMIN THE TOP IN THIS!!
*cough* that probably sounds weird, huh? well, ahm, yes, i'm glad you don't make him overly-cute!

fried chicken~~

[numbuh_009]

*pets EunHae* I love top!Min like you wouldn't believe! Unfortunately, I seem to be in the minority. KyuMin is my second fave pairing, but the reason I don't read much of it is because I have a huge issue with Sungmin's characterization in most fics (he may be cute, but he's still a man yo). Watch out for bullets when eating. I got a little trigger happy.

[zaboomafoo76]

haha, i love top!Min, but i normally have him bottom when with Kyu, but i in no way make him girly, dude. he's badass, and it annoys me how a lot of people write him, so your writings are a breath of fresh air! :D

yummy, bullets~ XD