Bet On It Part 1

[numbuh_009]

Title: Bet On It
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, ninja!HanChul
Part: 1
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: Donghae meets an alluring man at a bar. Without meaning to, Donghae gets pulled into the man's world, much deeper than he had ever intended.

Comments

[peaches_n_kream]

hae must be so confused, lol, one moment hyuk's persistent, next moment he's mia! and i really like the characterizations so far, playful with a serious (ominous?) undertone.

excited to see where this is heading; thanks for sharing~

[numbuh_009]

Eunhyuk's a bit of tease isn't he? I don't know what undertones you're talking about ;) Thank you for commenting!

[tees2mai]

8DDDDDDD

[numbuh_009]

Glad you like it!

[hxcangel92]

hihi! i found your fic and i think it's going to be a really good story!
can't wait for next chapter~
oh, and i am Jackie btw, can we be friends? ^_^

[numbuh_009]

Thank you very much for the comment! And sure! I'm Cindy.

[jasminezilla]

Aw, that's cute. Eunhyuk's all Donghae can talk about. *laughs*

Oooh, I want to know what happens next! Please update soon :D

[numbuh_009]

Well with someone as hot as Eunhyuk, who else would he want to think about? Thanks for reading and commenting!

[mochijang]

PINK mug! Sungmin totally got that for Kyu~ 8D

"complained Kyuhyun, cheek still glued to the counter."
Poor Kyu. x)

“We should do this again sometime,” slurred Kyuhyun happily.
“No, never again,” Donghae groaned,
LOL!

I wonder where Hyukkie went. D:

[numbuh_009]

Hehe, glad you caught the pink mug. Kyuhyun and Donghae suffer much abuse in each other's hands. Eunhyuk...not telling! Thank you for the comment!