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Bet On It Part 1

Jan 01, 2011 14:00

Title: Bet On It
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, ninja!HanChul
Part: 1
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: Donghae meets an alluring man at a bar. Without meaning to, Donghae gets pulled into the man's world, much deeper than he had ever intended.

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fanfiction, rating: r, fandom: super junior, pairing: haehyuk

Comments 47

miljnte January 1 2011, 22:43:58 UTC

i love it~!!!will wait for the next chapter~!!

numbuh_009 January 1 2011, 23:33:12 UTC

Thank you for reading!

zaboomafoo76 January 1 2011, 23:09:49 UTC

aw poor Donghae! Hyukkie's gonna come back to him, right?
can't wait to read more~

[[damn, out-ninja'ed again. i just HAD to make brownies...XD]]

numbuh_009 January 1 2011, 23:35:57 UTC

LOL! Your ninja skills are defeated by the strangest things! Hehe, thanks for the comment!

zaboomafoo76 January 2 2011, 04:44:29 UTC

but i looooooooooove brownies! i made the minty kind with green frosting~

numbuh_009 January 2 2011, 06:21:02 UTC

Ah, brownies. That explains all (though I don't like mint...)

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numbuh_009 January 1 2011, 23:36:40 UTC

Your comment just made me really happy! Thank you!

dbsj0001 January 1 2011, 23:29:37 UTC

ha, it's hard to get out once you're addicted already~xP
Donghae,Donghae, Donghae, eating your own word now,huh?!?
Kyu is the perfect wake up call for him~
I wonder if they'll get reunited again? of course they would,right?!
can't wait to see more~~

numbuh_009 January 1 2011, 23:39:23 UTC

It's hard not to get addicted to someone like Eunhyuk! Thank you for reading and commenting!

chiyo_87 January 2 2011, 00:47:24 UTC

The stranger could not have been much older than Donghae himself. He had a slim, but fit build. His milky white skin seemed to glow in the dim lighting of the bar. He had a wicked jaw line, and the smirk that graced his full lips matched the mischievous glint in his eyes. Most noticeably, his hair was dyed a fiery red.
- Oooo how I love the way you make him sound so alluring here :3

“Oh, I thought it would be rude to leave before you woke up,” said Donghae awkwardly. After all, he couldn’t find his boxers.
- LMAO at the boxers!

I absolutely love how you describe eunhae and kyu's relationships here and the characters the portray. Love how the story's going so far. I'm deeply captivated ^^

numbuh_009 January 2 2011, 06:24:48 UTC

I think Eunhyuk with red hair is the sexiest thing ever so those descriptions come out automatically. Their relationships with one another are my favorite parts of the fic so I'm glad you pointed that out. Thanks for reading!