LOUISE DORCHESTER

Mar 10, 2007 18:32

PLAYER DETAILS
Name (or alias): Leeann
LJ: ”pirazz”
AIM SN: Optional: Sweetxpea149

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status: dropped, player: leeann

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PENDING prettyhowtown March 14 2007, 11:26:24 UTC
Just a quick thing that you already know you need to fix, so I'll just remind you:

-The subject line needs to be your character's name

There's more to come on her actual character, but word on that will come in the next few days after I've gathered and processed input!

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Re: PENDING pirazz March 14 2007, 21:48:00 UTC
Fixed. :)

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Pending np_dumbledore March 15 2007, 17:32:10 UTC
Okay, upon review of the application there are a few things I would like for you to fix/elaborate on ( ... )

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Re: Pending pirazz March 19 2007, 02:55:58 UTC
Eh, sorry it's taken me so long. Real life caught up to me and beat me with a stick. Now I'm back, and in need of a distractions.

H'okay, so. I fixed the typos, and added Muggle studies to her optional third class with an O. Her hometown is Poole, England.

I can understand where you’re coming from about Kate Bosworth, but I personally think that she is one of those people that look young until they’re 40. I wont be a pain about it and argue, but I would like to point out that Evangeline Lily is the four years older than Kate Bosworth is. Anyways, I modified her appearance and was wondering if switching to Laura Ramsey okay? Two different colored eyes were there because of Kate Bosworth's eyes are two different colors. If I’m not using her as my PB than Lou doesn’t need to have different colored eyes.
New Eye Description
They’re a dark grew color and although Louise isn’t a big fan of make up, she usually wears heavy black eyeliner and mascara to make them seem darker than they actually are.

PersonalityLouise is also a ( ... )

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APPROVED np_dumbledore March 25 2007, 11:55:00 UTC
My apologies for taking so long to get back to you. My life decided to take the baseball bat route ;)

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