so i wrote a poem. whoops.

[notyourshot]

leave your fingerprints on the tape, and then we can watch life amidst the staticbecause i love you, i will leave

Comments

[lullaby101]

I just had to comment to say I really like this.
Some of the images you create are fantastic, really vivid to me - for example -
i will pick
my footsteps
up from the floor
and rewind to the
backdoor.

Also;
it's a litany of
'i stayed too long,
i'm leaving too soon'

and
'i'm blaming
you,
and only
you'

I don't know quite what it was, but I adored these stanzas.

Anyway, just had to comment =)

[notyourshot]

:D
thank you so much, i'm actually really proud of these poem.
♥

[outoflullabies]

wow.
I really, really liked it.
The shit I write is just chaotic and basically sentences that will hopefully rhyme but this was really organised in a good way.

: D

[notyourshot]

lol i suck at rhyming, so i kind of give up. i seldom write poetry though, so, idk.

but thanks!

[outoflullabies]

It's even better if you don't write often!!!

[youretheartist]

you already know. this is a piece of ART.

[notyourshot]

merci :)
recien lo pase a un cuaderno y, no se, es lindo verlo en papel.

[notyourshot]

lo que nadie me dijo es si se entendio lo que significaba el ultimo !

[youretheartist]

creo firmemente que la poesía no es sobre entender sino sobre poder hacerse una imagen de lo que sucede y asociarla con lo que cada uno quiera, así que mil personas pueden entender mil cosas diferentes, pero para mí tiene un significado de... sé que en realidad no va con el significado literal de las palabras pero la elección y colocación son como una invitación a volver a cometer el error que lleva a la situación inicial, no sé si me explico.