Detroit Waves (Chapter 9)

[notoriousjk]

Title:Detroit Waves (Chapter 9

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[dld_ftw]

Argh. So painful but so necessary. I hope writing this will help you get some things out. xo

[notoriousjk]

thank you, just finished the next chapter. :-)

[nandolove28]

I'm sooooo glad this is back. I have been wondering if you were going to continue with it.

Stevie and Nando really do need to talk. They are both being selfish. They either need to end it completely or get back together.

What they are both doing to Xabi and Sergio is bad. Though, I am glad Xabi was smart enough to say he couldn't see Stevie until he sorted things out with Nando. I feel badly for Sergio, because I feel like he is going to be the one that really gets hurt in all this.

I think Stevie may be able to move on with Xabi, but I feel like Nando won't be able to and Sergio will be the one who suffers because of it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!! xx

[notoriousjk]

You have some interesting theories about the plot, sadly i can't tell you.

It's been hard getting back into it, but expect chapter 10 very soon.

thanks!

[kissmecait17]

I was so into what was happening that I didn't realize the chapter was ending. Sad Caitlin. How is it possible for me to be sad for absolutely everyone in this fic? Even when they're against each other, they're all so human and relatable that I can't help but be sad. I like that this is complicated because it feels more realistic. Fernando and Stevie really love(d) each other but it got out of hand, they both messed up and now they can't go back.
And you know I loved every mention of Fernando realizing that Sergio probably wants more from him, that he is a good man who is letting Fernando use him because he cares so much. I love Sergio written that way.
I'm so glad you updated this. I forgot how much I love it.
I also love The Civil Wars an alarming amount.

[notoriousjk]

ha! so The Civil Wars are coming to my area after all, but I can 't get anyone to go with me, sadness.

Thank you so much, that's what I hope people get out of these characters, no one is perfect, and everyone is human.

chapter 10 coming up soon.

[influira]

=(

i feel so bad for xabi and sergio.

ah. god.

[notoriousjk]

everyone is hurting, it's sad, but unfortunately, sometimes that's life. :-/

chapter 10 coming soon

[narusaku4vr]

I really missed this fic and I am really happy you updated it.

This is heartbreaking. I am though glad that Xabi recognized what's needed to be done, to happen. Nando and Stevie need to talk to clarify things, they need to forgive each other so they can move on and fix things.
My heart hurts for all of them because they are all so real and they know how to accept their mistakes.

[notoriousjk]

thank you, I missed this fic too, it's been hard getting back into the writing swing of things though.

you hit the nail on the head with that last statement, now let's just hope they can all move on.

chapter 10 coming soon.