Detroit Waves (Chapter 9)

Feb 19, 2012 09:43

Title:Detroit Waves (Chapter 9 ( Read more... )

fernando torres, steven gerrard, sergio ramos, detroit waves, xabi alonso

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kfunk22 February 20 2012, 02:38:33 UTC
OMG! SO GOOD TO SEE YOUR FACE, WELL, AT LEAST YOUR USER ICON! missed you round here, lady! here's hoping writing it out will help you through whatever you're going through, jk.

and OUCH. they've all got some serious shit to work through here. and in the midst of all this hurt, couldn't help but laugh at this line: he’s not the sort person that leaves cigarette butts in cemeteries.

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notoriousjk March 23 2012, 22:39:47 UTC
ha! I wouldn't leave cigarette butts in cemeteries either, but I would/have smoked after a break up, so that bit was one of my faves.

Thanks! Now if I can only keep myself going with this writing, it's hard to get back into the swing of things.

chapter 10 is coming up soon, so soon you'll see if they can work through all their shit, although I will say, a lot of times when you have that much shit to work through you don't always say all the things you need to say.

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notoriousjk March 23 2012, 22:41:19 UTC
Oozes Detroit eh? Well the Detroit River makes an appearance in the next chapter.

Things are going to get worse I fear though before they get better :-/

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thopix February 20 2012, 10:39:33 UTC
I'm glad you are back! I really missed your writting. Without your sernando fics LJ wasn't the same.

Finally it seems that Fernando-Stevie will clear things up. I think it's necessary. Everyone is hurting right now. That's painful but realistic I suppose. I understand that maybe they'll be not happy ending here. You must do what you feel fits more to the story.

I hope you're well. I'm having a rough time too but you know what they say... all will pass.

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notoriousjk March 23 2012, 22:42:24 UTC
you are too kind. It's been hard getting back into the writing swing of things, but I promise I shall finish this fic, happy ending or not.

Chapter 10 coming up soon.

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basil7 February 22 2012, 07:21:25 UTC
I'm so glad that you are back!

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notoriousjk March 23 2012, 22:42:37 UTC
thank you!!!

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xabistevie22 February 22 2012, 22:17:57 UTC
AAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!

Yeah you're back, I had almost given up hope but I was so happy when I saw this I danced around the room :)

It's awesome and tragic and so unfair all rolled up into one. Xabi did the right thing, Stevie can't move on without talking with Fernando. Nando himself, well I don't know - I don't know if I believe him when he says he would have moved, it's like he's putting the blame all on Stevie and I will always feel protective of that I suppose. Sergio is just caught up in it all, and like Xabi, could be one of those most hurt in all this.

Anyway, thrilled to see your back posting and I hope that whatever life threw at you just made you stronger in the long run. It's not always easy, i know, but I'm really glad your back. *hugs*

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notoriousjk March 23 2012, 22:44:20 UTC
I'd almost given up hope on myself, and it's been hard getting back into the writing swing of things again.

You're going to find out a lot more about what both Stevie and Nando feel, honestly, about each other, and about what happened, and the shoulda, coulda, wouldas, if that makes sense.

chapter 10 coming soon.

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