So that you will hear me

May 11, 2011 21:55

Title:'So that you will hear me' (A sequel of sorts to 'Its the Wrong Dream, With the Wrong Man ( Read more... )

fernando torres, arsenal, sergio ramos, its the wrong dream with the wrong man, fic

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kissmecait17 May 12 2011, 04:39:41 UTC
“Now, can I do all those things to you that you mentioned in your texts?”
YOU KNOW I loved that line previously. Hahaha If only someone would send me dirty texts during commencement!

“Oh?..........ooohhhhh.” Sergio gasps as Fernando sticks his hand right down his sweatpants.
OH MY GOSH. I can see this and I am laughing. Laughing so hard.

Sergio moans with each pull, each tug, each squeeze Fernando makes as he continues to make, very unsubtle, allusions to Arsenal and sex
I LOVE this side of Fernando. I love seeing them together like this because dammit then happy is all I ever wanted.

“Thanks.”

“For what? Blowing you? You know I’d do that anytime, anyplace.”JUST. MY FAVORITE. It's so true too. He would. Anytime, anyplace. That Fernando is a lucky, lucky guy. (Still laughing at the exchange ( ... )

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notoriousjk May 12 2011, 05:12:57 UTC
he he you are an adorkable tipsy person.

I put that Neruda stuff in there just for you <3 Although Nando's line about "so you can hear me, so you will understand" kind of came naturally, then I just thought, oh what the hell, I'll have Nando quote some poetry, why not, Cait will love it. (and you did, so yeah!!!)

I wanted to show that slightly horny side of Fernando, that side that couldn't keep his hands of Sergio, because he'd been attracted to/in love with Sergio for quite a while before they got together. I mean if Sergio Ramos walked out w/only a pair of Arsenal sweatpants...........*fans self* yeah. Can't really blame Fernando.

And, I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. It was fun to write, and it felt good to write again, even if it turned out into this sappy fic.

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narusaku4vr May 12 2011, 18:11:02 UTC
It's sappy but it's a heartwarming kind of sappy...I don't know if I'm making any sense because I'm a puddle of goo right now.... I love their friendship, I love their love, I love that finally they're getting their happy ending!!! I love it all!!!

I don't read a lot of Pablo Neruda poems but except for this one and I like it a lot.

Hope you write more from this verse.

Will it be okay if you add me when I add you???

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notoriousjk May 13 2011, 01:34:18 UTC
Oh you should read some of his other poems, they are beautiful. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

Sure I will add you :-)

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hahahahagas May 12 2011, 18:23:56 UTC
Nearly had heart failure when I saw you posted another sequel ...
This is so good and I love how sappy it is I think they deserve a little sappyness after all the heartache *poor babies*
And you deserve a medal for conjouring up the picture of Sergio in a pair of Arsenal sweatpants and just Arsenal sweatpants(ok I need a minute to compose myself)and inserting it in my brain .. I am forever greatful :-)
'Sergio tells Fernando that he actually has tickets for the Eye-he’s never seen Fernando run that fast'- Hahahahaha I laughed so hard at that.

Glad your friends helped cheer you up and back to yourself ... another reason for me to be thankful for the mere exsistance of kissmecait :-)

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notoriousjk May 13 2011, 01:36:38 UTC
Sergio in just Arsenal sweatpants, mhmmm yes please.

Yes, they do deserve a little sappiness I suppose. I'm so glad you enjoyed & yes Cait is pretty amazing.

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kylijah May 12 2011, 19:15:35 UTC
aww this was cute! I really enjoyed that and it made me laugh and I actually think it's one of your best ;-)

It’s a, rare, sunny day
OI! ok..thats true.

“Mhmm, yes I do love an Arsenal man.”
duuuude! I can always count on Fernando to think what I'm thinking even if well, Arsenal..well.. (kiiiiding)

MOAR PLEASE

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notoriousjk May 13 2011, 01:40:02 UTC
Awwhhh, thank you. Sap isn't my favorite to write, but hey I guess I can do some things well ;-P

The same could be said about where I grew up too.

*snort* What are you waiting for Cesc is waiting...maybe.

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kylijah May 13 2011, 22:02:51 UTC
Yes I know, your favourite thing to write is about turtles, so go on, what are you waiting for???!!!!

Cesc...hmmmm........that icon is hot.......

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kimy_prince May 13 2011, 02:30:23 UTC
OMFG! thia is the most sweetest that i ever read! is sooo amazing
i love nando quote neruda is so...humm. sweet/hot/romantic!
i love this saga (¿?) as much as i love the little mini fics from this saga :3 hope u write more and

hope the next fic about this two!

p.d. i want that sweatpants :P

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notoriousjk May 13 2011, 20:45:35 UTC
d'wah thank you. It was almost too sweet.

I do completely love this verse, so maybe I'll write a couple more in it, we'll see.

P.S I want the man & the sweatpants ;-)

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