love the neruda. love fernando's aggressiveness. he's all like: "sergio, we need to get sexin', and stat." i was so glad to get a glimpse of this, as we haven't really seen this side of their relationship before. what an unexpected treat!
I read this before going to work this morning & I snorted, but yes this is exactly what Fernando was doing. I'm glad you enjoyed this side of their relationship, it was fun writing Nando as the handsy one this time around (as long as it wasn't it public)
Hi! I just read this whole saga from the beginning to the end and wow... you are such an amazing writer! The characters are written totally believable and fit together so perfectly. On the one hand I was very sad when they grew apart and broke up, but on the other it made perfect sense that they needed some time apart just to find each other again when both of them were ready. I adore this whole love story and this couple...ah, I want them to be real! I noticed that you didn't describe the first time they had sex and I kinda missed this because in the last chapter they are talking about it shortly, but we don't know what happened there. Anyway, thank your for this great fic!
Wow thank you for such a lovely comment. I absolutely adore these characters, and became quite attached to them. So I'm so pleased to hear they resonated with you. As for not describing the first time they had sex, well I guess I could always write that sometime in the future if you would like. :-) thanks again for lovely comment & for reading
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Thank you, as always, for commenting. <3
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Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. I love you.
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btw love the new icon, it makes me giggle.
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he's all like: "sergio, we need to get sexin', and stat." i was so glad to get a glimpse of this, as we haven't really seen this side of their relationship before.
what an unexpected treat!
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I read this before going to work this morning & I snorted, but yes this is exactly what Fernando was doing. I'm glad you enjoyed this side of their relationship, it was fun writing Nando as the handsy one this time around (as long as it wasn't it public)
I also love Neruda, obviously.
Thank you for commenting, as always!
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The characters are written totally believable and fit together so perfectly. On the one hand I was very sad when they grew apart and broke up, but on the other it made perfect sense that they needed some time apart just to find each other again when both of them were ready.
I adore this whole love story and this couple...ah, I want them to be real!
I noticed that you didn't describe the first time they had sex and I kinda missed this because in the last chapter they are talking about it shortly, but we don't know what happened there.
Anyway, thank your for this great fic!
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