A Story of a Man & his turtle (Chapter 5)

Mar 13, 2011 12:14

Title: A story of a man and his turtle (5/5 ( Read more... )

fernando torres, a story of a man & his turtle, sergio ramos, fic

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kissmecait17 March 13 2011, 18:36:00 UTC
Instead, he goes home and tries to play football with Horsey, but he isn’t interested. (he always seems to prefer to play with Sergio) He eats a piece of lettuce out of Fernando’s hand and then crawls back to his towel. I like to imagine this scene playing out. Oh to be a fly on that wall...

“Fer, there will always be women in leather flirting with me…….you should wear leather more often, show off that ass of yours.” Two things: I should have known you weren't kidding when you said you would use it. And, his ass would look so, so good in leather. Yes.

right now though I want to see my baby. Where’s Horsey? His. Baby. asldkjaflk

You know I think the end is perfect. I just love how it all came together. And I was looking forward to that the whole fic because it's so damn funny to imagine Horsey just watching them have sex.

I'm sad this is over but you know'll I reread it again and again. Haha

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notoriousjk March 14 2011, 05:20:28 UTC
LOL you should know that when I say I will write something in a fic, I will do it. And yes Fernando needs to show off that ass more.

Horsey is a creeper, watching & writing secret fanfic about them ;-P

It was never going to be that long, how much could you write about a tumblr rumor really?

Thank you so much for you know, just being you.

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dld_ftw March 13 2011, 18:45:09 UTC
ROTFLMAO!

You've done it again! Great ending to the Horsey saga (or is it?)

I love you putting in the part about sending the jersey to Africa, Arsene's gift basket and the following lines just destroyed me:

"a turtle cliff……oh my God, what if he tries to jump? He might have turtle ptsd from his traumatic kidnapping.”

“He always likes everything you get him, it’s because you spoil him. I have to be the mean one.”

“First I have to take Horsey’s tank outside, he can’t watch.”

“Way to kill the moment Fernando.”

“Oh my God, look Sergio he was watching, he’s sitting on his cliff watching us.”

“Well maybe that was the last straw for him, and he’s going to jump.”

::wipes away tears of laughter:: Just what I needed in the midst of my hellish finals week.

Welcome back! We missed you.

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notoriousjk March 14 2011, 05:22:15 UTC
I had that last scene planned out from the very beginning of this chapter, so I'm glad you enjoyed. & I'm glad it gave you a much needed break from finals.

I srsly cracked myself up writing the bit about the Arsenal gift basket.

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fluff1038 March 13 2011, 21:30:16 UTC
This was an awesome ending! I loved the Arsene bit, it actually could be true!
Turtle cliff - lol, now I really want a turtle just so I can be like Sergio and spoil it :D

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notoriousjk March 14 2011, 05:23:25 UTC
ha ha, yeah I was in the pet store last week for my cat, and decided to take a stroll through the reptile isle, apparently this fic has effected me too much ;-P

I'm glad you enjoyed!

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hahahahagas March 13 2011, 22:53:53 UTC
ahhhhhhhh so cute and the mental image of horsey sittin on the cliff watching them is hillarious... brilliant fic ,,, cant wait for whatever you come up with next :-)

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notoriousjk March 14 2011, 05:24:06 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed!!

I've got plans & an outline, but it'll be a little while

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wh_mermaid March 14 2011, 00:39:18 UTC
what if he tries to jump? He might have turtle ptsd from his traumatic kidnapping

*dead*

ILU so much. I laughed so hard the entire time I read this series. I'm just picturing both of them cuddling with this really excited turtle in between them and it's a visual image that will never leave my mind. Thank you so much for putting in there

<3333

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notoriousjk March 14 2011, 05:25:11 UTC
so glad you enjoyed! LOL the idea of Sergio & Fernando cuddling w/a bb turtle is rather adorable ;-P

thank you so much for reading & commenting

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