Sunshine: Trinity

[notevery]

Trinity

“I want to see him fuck you,” Cassie had said, and that was how it all began.

Or not.  No, that can’t have been it.  It began when she walked in on them, breathless and quivering with want and aggression, half-kissing and half-fighting in the Observation Room three months ago; it began the first time Mace and Capa fucked, half hate

Comments

[kismeteve]

Resting her hand lightly on her belly, Cassie doesn't reply.

DUDE. This is awesome.

[kismeteve]

Stylistically solid, but also a perfect embodiment of everything that's sad and pointless about slash. Too much angst, too much bitterness, too much implausibility, and too little plot. In a nutshell, a waste of time.

[notevery]

I'm sorry that you feel that way! Though I never intended for it to be a 'plot' story--more than anything it was intended to be a snapshot, an evocation of a few moments--I can understand missing that if it's what you like. As for it being sad and bitter, it most definitely is! However, that was intended to be much more of a quality necessary for something between these three characters, in this situation, than anything else; I don't think it's a defining quality of slash--at least not as I write it.

Thank you for the comment, though! I'm glad that you thought the writing worked even if the content wasn't to your taste.

[notevery]

Thank you very much! I'm flattered that you think so.

[sunrunnersioned]

*g* I just loved this fic!!~

[notevery]

Thank you! :)