LJ Idol - Week 26-B: Face to Face

May 12, 2010 15:59

LJ Idol - Week 26-B: Face to Face

(This is a direct continuation of the Open Topic for the week. If you haven't already, that entry should be read first. Both ought to be able to stand alone, but they are specifically designed to be read together, in order.)

Monday, May 10th, 2010
  • 9:15 AM - On my way back inside now. Please don't follow, I should ( Read more... )

lj idol, underground, fictional life, adventure tuesday!

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beautyofgrey May 16 2010, 17:21:31 UTC
WOW! This is wicked, and I love the ending. Fantastic writing!

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notbatman May 17 2010, 01:48:24 UTC
Thanks! I had a lot of fun with this one. I've been wanting to kill a protagonist in First Person for a while, now.

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mstrobel May 16 2010, 18:24:10 UTC
Now THAT was an adventure. My heart is literally pounding ... fantastic job :D

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notbatman May 17 2010, 01:48:59 UTC
Thanks so much! I really liked the whole process of writing this one.

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cacophonesque May 17 2010, 11:29:59 UTC
Cool! Although this might be part of why I'm also scared of exploring.

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notbatman May 18 2010, 21:02:48 UTC
Thanks!

Being devoured by monsters is (usually) pretty low on the list of things I worry about, on any given trip.

That being said, the place is real and so is the hole and I haven't gone back to check on it because now I'm a little afraid that maybe there are monsters inside after all...

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beeker121 May 17 2010, 18:23:26 UTC
Now it's even more evil! The double point of view is awesome.

And we have proof that twitter is an evil plot designed to lure us to our deaths.

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notbatman May 18 2010, 21:03:23 UTC
Beware the twits!!!

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rattsu May 18 2010, 22:36:39 UTC
Very, very clever. Loved it!

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notbatman May 18 2010, 23:50:21 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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