Comments | notaboutthefish: In Time: Solidarity

not_a_zatarc in notaboutthefish

In Time: Solidarity

Sep 01, 2009 09:05

Title: Solidarity
Summary: Jack needs his family to remind him that he's not alone.
Timeframe: AU, any
Characters/Pairing: Established SJ
Genre: Drama, Angst, Family, Fluff
Rating: G.
Note: Written for Challenge 115 part one, over at sj_everyday.
( Solidarity )

angst, au, series: in time, drama, family, established relationship, fluff

Comments 12

regularamanda September 1 2009, 21:28:24 UTC

Awww Naz!! That was so incredibly cute...but still had a touch of sadness to it...I love it! :) Excellent job! :D

not_a_zatarc September 2 2009, 02:13:26 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

thothmes September 2 2009, 03:57:10 UTC

You really make us feel the hollow world of the suddenly blind with its edge of unreality.

Jack doesn't do dependant well, does he?

not_a_zatarc September 2 2009, 04:57:15 UTC

Thank you. :) And nope, he certainly doesn't.

sb158 September 2 2009, 06:45:28 UTC

Aw, this was cute, but kind of bittersweet...

not_a_zatarc September 2 2009, 13:08:51 UTC

Heh, yeah. Don't worry, Jack gets his sight back, though. :)
I was going to write in a scene near the end where Jack says he starts to see something, noticing a difference in light or dark, or something like that, but it just didn't fit, so I left it out.

angelus2hot September 7 2009, 00:41:49 UTC

*sighs* Very touching and BEAUTIFULLY written!

not_a_zatarc September 7 2009, 03:26:25 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

jasminago September 16 2009, 14:21:53 UTC

Great story. Beautifully written.

not_a_zatarc September 16 2009, 16:52:23 UTC

Thank you so much! :)