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Prompt Post 3

Jul 08, 2011 15:43

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Fill: "Hunted" 1/? psychoshinji July 18 2011, 21:14:46 UTC

All of the Loki talk going on for the past 12 hours has gotten me even more revved up to finish and start posting. :D Sorry it took so long to begin posting the fill for this, OP. I've been really, really busy. But stuff like this and the awesome fan-antics that've been happening keep me going and fill me with warm fuzzy feelings. <3 Hope you enjoy it ( ... )

Fill: "Hunted" 2/? psychoshinji July 18 2011, 21:15:32 UTC

His attempt to unfasten the stifling cloak cost him dearly. Leaping in a poorly thought out effort to skip clear over a twisted root, he came down hard on his feet and winced as he felt icy water splash over them to soak his boots through and through. He had landed in a small stream. Without hesitation, he continued onward, limping a little bit in his stride. The frigid water compounded with his heavy boots made each step burning agony ( ... )

Fill: "Hunted" 3/? psychoshinji July 18 2011, 21:16:15 UTC

Before he could stop to think about the consequences he would face later for his actions, the trickster scrambled to his feet and sprinted, kicking dirt in all directions. He had to hide. He had to somehow recover his strength ( ... )

Fill: "Hunted" 4/? psychoshinji July 18 2011, 21:17:56 UTC

He scrabbled to his hands and knees, clawing at the soil. Thor was never one to end a hunt so quickly. He enjoyed the chase. Loki sought to use this to his advantage, knowing full well that his brother may let him escape for the challenge of it all ( ... )

Re: Fill: "Hunted" 4/? ginger_maya July 18 2011, 21:57:51 UTC

OUCH. I actually feel sorry for Loki. While what he did was very bad, the punishment is awful. >:D And I enjoy it so.

Still, I hope that Thor will regret it at some point.

Re: Fill: "Hunted" 4/? psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:23:53 UTC

Hehehe, I feel sorry for him, too. As soon as I saw the prompt I got excited because Loki in bad situations=my ultimate kink. >:3 I'm such a dick, lol- I wrote Thor as such a jerk in this fic. And it felt so good. XD

OP manic capslock of gratitude neuroticismette July 18 2011, 22:47:43 UTC

OH MY GOD I JUST WOKE UP AND I HAVE TO DRESS UP FOR SCHOOL BUT I SAW THIS IN MY INBOX AND MY HEART KIND OF JUMPED OUT OF MY CHEST AND NOW

T_T

I WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SIT STRAIGHT IN CLASS. I WILL BE WAITING FOR THIS ALL DAY. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

This is more than I could have imagined :>

Re: OP manic capslock of gratitude psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:25:52 UTC

#^^# Thanks~ I hope you have/had a good day! I'm not sure about the ending, but I hope it doesn't disappoint.

Re: Fill: "Hunted" 4/? psychoshinji July 18 2011, 23:00:44 UTC

I would like to stab Odin, Thor, Sif, and the Waariors Three. And most of Asgard.

That said, your writing and story telling are impeccable.

Re: Fill: "Hunted" 4/? psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:29:26 UTC

Wow, thank you!

Fill: "Hunted" 5/? psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:30:55 UTC

Thor gritted his teeth and lunged forward, looming over Loki. Something snapped and adrenaline surged through Loki's body. He flipped himself over onto his stomach and kicked away, hoping he could gain a few moments of freedom before fleeing once more ( ... )

Fill: "Hunted" 6/? psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:34:52 UTC

Thor ran his coarse fingertip over Loki's spine lightly. Loki shivered once more and squirmed. Thor grinned and traced the finger up to Loki's spread ass. Loki moaned as the finger trailed over each rounded cheek. The touch was surprisingly delicate in light of Thor's rage ( ... )

Fill: "Hunted" 7/? psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:37:54 UTC

Thor squeezed Loki's cock again and stroked it slowly. Loki moaned and attempted to hold himself up with his arms, but he was pushed down onto the dirt once more by Thor's heavy hand. The fingers inside of his ass crooked firmly against his prostate and he jerked back into Thor's touch with a strangled cry ( ... )

Re: Fill: "Hunted" 7/? psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:50:45 UTC

Yeep, awkward wording there. And for some reason I can't edit the comment because "someone has already replied to the comment". And that someone is me. XD Ffft.

What I should have said is:

"Loki felt the impressive member stretch him wide open and push against his prostate with sudden force. His mouth opened in a silent gasp before he squeezed his eyes shut and let loose a sharp scream. It echoed into the depths of the forest. Thor alternately kissed and nipped his way up Loki's tender back, licking the cuts and scrapes he found there. He stilled and leaned into Loki's ear once more."

.....I have a bad tendency to be overly repetitive with my writing, I think. I'll hopefully improve upon that as I practice more.

Fill: "Hunted" 8/8 psychoshinji July 19 2011, 02:57:12 UTC

Thor snapped his hips forward, pushing Loki into the dirt with him. He pulled back in a smooth motion and slammed back in. Loki tasted dirt once more as his trembling arms failed him. He had reached his exhaustion point long ago during the hunt. Loki could only rest his chin on his arms as he was fucked fast and furious in the ass by his brother ( ... )

Re: Fill: "Hunted" 8/8 xmoonveilx July 19 2011, 04:10:08 UTC

Thoroughly ravished Loki has to be one of my biggest kinks ever. <3
Possessive!Thor gets all my love as well. Very, very delicious, thanks for the lovely fill!

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