Prompt Post 3
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Keep up the awesome, folks.
Announcement: All new and continuing fills for Round 3 should be posted in the Overflow Post.
THIS ROUND IS CLOSED TO NEW PROMPTS.
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"There is no escape!" Thor's shout pierced Loki's eardrum. Loki didn't dare look up or back. He scrambled across the ashes of the disintegrated thorn patch and nearly got to his feet when he felt Thor's heavy boot slam down onto his back. The wind was knocked out of him and he let out a pitiful squeak. His mind was clouded with fear, but in a flash of wry acceptance he realized that he sounded (and felt) much like a tiny mouse under the paw of a great lion.
Before he could draw breath again, Mjolnir was placed firmly on his back between his shoulder-blades. He cried out, kicking and clawing fruitlessly at the dark soil beneath him. It was absolutely futile. Mjolnir moved for no one but Thor. The weight upon his back was stifling but not altogether unpleasant; it was what would happen to him while trapped that worried him.
Thor kept his hand on the handle of Mjolnir and called forth lightening once more. Rather than burning Loki to a crisp, however, it subjected him to a much less merciful sentence. Jagged, tiny lines of lightening traced their way through Loki's ruined clothing. He winced as he felt the instant surge of heat so intense that it felt like it might be ice. His clothing fell off of him in bits that resembled cracked pieces of gold and green eggshell.
Loki bit his lip and let the tears fall from his eyes when he felt the damp forest air brush against his naked buttocks. He kicked weakly and wriggled his hips, but still he could not move from the spot.
His hindquarters were wrenched forcefully in the air and he tasted the dirt beneath him. He thrashed wildly in a desperate last bid to free himself, but the hammer pinned him heavily to the forest ground. Unable to support his upper back, he could only writhe helplessly as the round of his ass was spread by hot, calloused hands.
"P-please...brother, please. Have some mercy on me."
But Thor would not hear it. Grinning like a hungry wolf, Thor's teeth gleamed in the dim forest light.
"I think not, my little doe. Right now, we cease momentarily to be brothers. Right now, we shall be predator and prey."
Loki gulped. A rare thing indeed. Perhaps he could joke his way out of this predicament.
"A-and who might be... the prey? Brother, you are many things, but a fawn or doe is not one of them. Perhaps you could pretend to be a- a- a rabbit or a squirrel..?"
A sharp crack landed on his buttocks, making him yelp. He was in a wanton position, chest flush against the ground and his ass high in the air supported by bent legs. Loki sputtered in indignation, but Thor leaned over him and gave his pale cheeks a squeeze and another smack. Loki stiffened when he felt Thor's armored chest and arms spread over his back.
Thor's voice was low in his ear.
"I think you know I am not the prey in this situation. You realize how well and truly trapped you are." Thor licked the shell of Loki's ear and then nipped with sharp canines. Loki gasped and fought against the shiver that ran up his spine. Thor let out a breathy chuckle against his neck. Loki lay there, gasping for air with eyes wide open and full of tears. He could only stare at the ground in disbelief at what was happening. With every touch from the hunter he felt himself come undone.
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And then he felt nothing at all. Thor stood back, still looming dangerously over Loki's pale body. He watched as his prey wriggled ever so slightly, aroused by the now-absent touch. Loki hated to admit it, but his brother's warm touch was preferable to the chilled air brushing over him. In fact, given his prone position and inability to turn his head to see what Thor was doing, he felt more secure when he at least felt Thor's touch instead of waiting anxiously for a blow that may come.
Loki had his arms extended in front of him, his hands fisting in the soil. His face was dirty and streaked with tears, though the faintest hint of pink flush was visible on his cheeks. Waiting without any idea of what his brother's next punishing move would be was agony for him. Suddenly, a warm drizzle of liquid landed on Loki's bottom. He gasped, shifting his hips in an attempt to avoid it. Thor placed his hand on Loki's hip bone to still him, drizzling the remaining oil directly down into Loki's crack.
Thor threw the bottle onto the ground and it landed in front of Loki's face. He focused on the tiny glass object with fearful eyes, wondering if it was somehow enchanted. Thor rubbed his hands over Loki's ass, squeezing and spreading the cheeks with each pass.
Loki moaned and his member twitched at the stimulation. Thor growled and bit down hard on the soft flesh of his ass, eliciting a cry of pain from his prey. He licked the sore spot and grazed it once more with his teeth. He reached around and gripped Loki's cock, squeezing once and rubbing a rough thumb over the tip before releasing him.
"Ah, it seems you enjoy being the prey, don't you?" Thor's voice remained low and dangerous, almost unrecognizable to Loki's ears. Loki flushed and said nothing. Thor gripped Loki's hips once more and drew his ass impossibly higher into the air. "Hm. Are you presenting yourself to me, my little doe?" Loki panted and struggled for breath as his back was arched uncomfortably. He tried not to think about how utterly exposed he was to his brother's eyes.
Loki hated to admit it, but he was somewhat impressed by his brother's ability to humiliate with words alone. He had never heard Thor speak like this to anyone before, and the exclusivity of the situation- as terrible as his situation was- revealed a sick admiration for his brother that he never knew he'd had. Thor's thick fingers rubbing oil into his entrance snapped him out of his twisted reverie.
Then Thor smacked him on the ass and thrusted the fingers roughly into his slick hole.
"AGH!" Loki cried out as the two digits plunged deeper and wiggled, stretching his ass open faster than he would have liked. Thor lowered Loki's ass and kicked his legs apart. From Loki's position under Mjolnir, it was difficult not to gasp in pain at the uncomfortable movement. Just as he thought he might pass out from the stifling pressure between his shoulder blades, Thor lifted Mjolnir with his free hand and set it out of Loki's reach. Loki breathed deeply, expanding his lungs fully for the first time in what felt like an eternity.
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"My little doe, you must not run away from me or your punishment will be even worse when I catch you." Thor twisted his fingers and brought his other hand back under Loki's raised hips to stroke his hard cock again. "But it seems you don't much desire to escape from me now, do you?"
When Loki did not answer, Thor pulled his fingers out of his ass and plunged three back in hard enough to push Loki forward with the thrust.
"DO YOU?"
"Hnn...n-noo..." Loki panted. Though Thor had freed him from Mjolnir's weight, he was now a prisoner of the pleasurable sensations running through his ass and cock.
Thor pressed his upper body down over Loki's back and bit him on the shoulder. He removed his fingers and Loki felt the tip of Thor's hard, thick cock pushing insistently against his ass. Loki's eyes widened and he found himself panting in anticipation. He felt utterly claimed by his brother's authority. As sick as it felt to him, he realized that he admired his brother's sudden show of power over him. Perhaps Thor had always held that power over him...
Thor pushed and pulled his cock over Loki's slicked up ass cheeks and Loki hissed as the hot brand warmed his bottom in the damp forest air. With another sharp bite to Loki's shoulder, Thor thrust the head of his manhood into Loki's tight hole. Loki was stretched and slick before, but nothing could prepare him for the shock of the thick member working its way into his rear.
He keened and spread his legs further, canting his hips upward in an effort to widen his hips for Thor's entry. Thor chuckled darkly and gripped Loki, pulling his ass back onto the entire length of his cock. Loki felt the impressive member stretch him wide open and push against his prostate with sudden force. His mouth opened in a silent gasp before he squeezed his eyes shut before letting loose a sharp scream. It echoed into the depths of the forest. Thor alternately kissed and nipped his way up Loki's tender back, licking the cuts and scrapes he found there. He stilled and leaned into Loki's ear once more.
"I want to hear you scream as I claim you, Loki. To hear you scream like a doe in heat."
Loki was too aroused and humiliated to respond. Even after all this time of thinking his brother a witless simpleton, Thor still surprised him sometimes. Loki bit his lip and let out a low whimper as he let Thor's lustful words sink into his brain.
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Ooh. I uh, kind of let some D/s slip in here. Sorry about that if it's not your cup of tea. I hope I didn't go too far with it! *hides face* I'm kind of at a loss as to how to write sex scenes gracefully, hehe, though it is fun.
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What I should have said is:
"Loki felt the impressive member stretch him wide open and push against his prostate with sudden force. His mouth opened in a silent gasp before he squeezed his eyes shut and let loose a sharp scream. It echoed into the depths of the forest. Thor alternately kissed and nipped his way up Loki's tender back, licking the cuts and scrapes he found there. He stilled and leaned into Loki's ear once more."
.....I have a bad tendency to be overly repetitive with my writing, I think. I'll hopefully improve upon that as I practice more.
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Loki let it all go. His muscles went limp and he relaxed around the thick cock surging in and out of his raw backside. With every thrust, he screamed his submission into the damp forest air. Thor growled like a wolf, concentrating only on his center of pleasure and gripping Loki's hips tight enough to bruise. In between his shouts of pleasure and pain and gods knew what else, Loki nearly drooled at the sound of his own slick butt cheeks smacking against Thor's hips with every feral thrust.
Thor let out a particularly feral growl, lowering his head so that his hair brushed lightly against Loki's naked back. The sensation tickled Loki's spine and sent a chill back down his body to the burning pressure in his ass and Loki came silently onto the dark soil. His asshole clenched involuntarily around Thor's cock. Thor groaned and panted through gritted teeth as he thrust thrice more as hard as his muscles allowed. He bit down on Loki's wounded shoulder as he came in thick hot torrents inside his prize.
Loki lay there with drool slicking his lips, hips rocking gently as his brother finished. His eyes were pools of exhaustion, more black than green with the physical arousal and lust of their twisted mating. Thor finally pulled out, trails of thick cum leaking down Loki's sore thighs. Loki slumped forward onto the soil, not caring how filthy his body got. Thor rested against his back, a solid and warm weight on his abused bottom. Loki whimpered as he felt Thor's hands spread his cheeks once more and a hot tongue lick at his leaking hole.
He was too exhausted to protest or make a move to escape. Loki wasn't even sure he wanted to escape, naked and tired as he was. Thor grunted, insatiable as he hungrily lapped up his own cum and teased his brother's pink hole. He licked up and around Loki's opening, pushing his tongue inside to lap up the cum around the rim. Loki shivered and said nothing, staring into the forest. He had much to consider after this experience. His eyelids grew heavier and he felt the tension from his exhausted and sore muscles leave him with each deepening breath.
Loki had fallen into a deep sleep by the time Thor finished cleaning him and wrapping him in his own cloak. Thor picked up his brother and carried him in his arms, swaddled in the red cloth. He planted a gentle kiss on his sleeping brother's face as he carried him back to the agreed-upon meeting place. Thor felt a pang of sadness at the realization that his brother slept too deeply to feel his kiss.
He knew the Warriors Three and Sif would be waiting for him at the edge of the forest. Thor could feel the magic returning to his brother's body, washing over the sleeping bundle in his arms.
He sighed and planted a triumphant smile across his face. He approached the edge of the woods, knowing that his friends would congratulate him on his punishment of Loki. The hunt was finally over.
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I love Thor, but I made him such a dick in this story. XD I have to admit that I find the idea of Thor growling and being all feral pretty hot, so I wanted to include it. Aaand it sort of fit my needs to ravish Loki even further. Sorry, Thor. I used you. X3 I hope you guys enjoyed it! Thank you so much for your patience and lovely feedback and encouragement. <3
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Possessive!Thor gets all my love as well. Very, very delicious, thanks for the lovely fill!
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feral possesive!Thor FTW!
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I never expected this direction but I love it so much. And the way you fleshed it out! An anon commenter above said it perfectly - your writing is impeccable.
I lovelovelove the way you wrote Loki and that scene. NGH. IDEK I MEAN I WAS TERRIFIED FOR LOKI AND YET I COULDN'T LOOK AWAY IT'S SO FUCKING GOD I CAN'T. And the way you ended it is just fucking amazing - Loki deadbeat, wrapped in his brother's cloak and that kiss. :3
Thank you so much for taking this one. I absolutely adore everything. Your work is splendid. And if I may -- because I saw a comment of yours above wherein you mentioned you were more used to illustrating than writing? -- if it ever crosses your fancy to draw some of the scenes here, pleasepleaseplease do! <3
You have won the internet, my love and my grandchildren's future empires!
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I cannot tell you how much this norsekink and Thor fandom in general is helping me with inspiration and confidence. I'm excited because I feel like I can write stuff and not feel embarrassed about actually putting it out there now. XD It'll probably help me a lot with pushing forward with my comics. I posted a couple of Thor-related sketches on my personal LJ. The most recent rough sketchy-sketch I posted was under friends lock but I just took that off. Here's a link in case you're interested: http://psychoshinji.livejournal.com/193296.html (hehe, sorry for the random dinner pic there).
I'd love to draw more Thor-related fan art! Normally I do an anime style so I'm still adjusting to attempting to capture Chris and Tom's likenesses, but I'd definitely be up for posting artfills in the future! Once I get a better handle on drawing Thor/Loki in a way that makes 'em recognizable I'll definitely start churning out some kinky pics, mwahaha. :D Thanks so much~ <3
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Normally I do an anime style so I'm still adjusting to attempting to capture Chris and Tom's likenesses
You are amazing. Where the hell did you come from? I want you in my life. Cannot even okay.
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I definitely like your thoroughly ravished Loki, that was just ajlkfjfaldkfj no words!
The chase was great, the sex was hot, that was perfect.
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