[GEN] or Loki/Victor von Doom. Loki!whump. Angst.
anonymous
May 2 2013, 03:05:44 UTC
Okay, we all have seen stories where Loki after being brutalised becomes the responsibility of his family or someone from Avengers. I want it different ths time
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Re: Fill: Strange Bedfellows 16/?futakuchi_onnaJuly 17 2013, 14:20:08 UTC
(You know, I really, really can't bring myself to be sorry for that relapse. XD)
Haha, paranoid Doom is glorious. And he has a point, Loki is not to be trusted normally. Even though it's not the problem this time, how's he to know that for sure? Loki is untrustworthy, fickle, annoying and a thousand other things, but he still wants that all back. That's great.^^
"Please," Victor tried to put an edge of emotion into his voice to be convincing, did entirely too good a job at it and ended up sounding like he wanted to cry.
That made me laugh way more than it maybe should, these new chapters are awesome. <3
Re: Fill: Strange Bedfellows 20/?futakuchi_onnaJuly 18 2013, 05:36:43 UTC
Awesome!
The details are great by the way. (And even though Loki's brain is damaged as it is, that he made progress already gives me hope you let him recover in the end. The story is great already, no matter whether he does recover or not, its just my own preference. But I'm not the OP and it's your story, so don't mind me.)
Ha, liar indeed. Doom can't even hide the pesky sentiment to a brain-damaged Loki. XD Also cuddling is always delicious to read.^^
Ooohoho, that is absolutely brilliant! Loki only just got a fraction of awareness back and already there are hidden agendas and thoughts. I love the characterization! Their more gentle interactions are believable while both still are the untrustworthy, evil kind-of-allies who never fully trusted each other.
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Haha, paranoid Doom is glorious. And he has a point, Loki is not to be trusted normally. Even though it's not the problem this time, how's he to know that for sure?
Loki is untrustworthy, fickle, annoying and a thousand other things, but he still wants that all back. That's great.^^
"Please," Victor tried to put an edge of emotion into his voice to be convincing, did entirely too good a job at it and ended up sounding like he wanted to cry.
That made me laugh way more than it maybe should, these new chapters are awesome. <3
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The details are great by the way. (And even though Loki's brain is damaged as it is, that he made progress already gives me hope you let him recover in the end. The story is great already, no matter whether he does recover or not, its just my own preference. But I'm not the OP and it's your story, so don't mind me.)
Ha, liar indeed. Doom can't even hide the pesky sentiment to a brain-damaged Loki. XD
Also cuddling is always delicious to read.^^
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Loki only just got a fraction of awareness back and already there are hidden agendas and thoughts.
I love the characterization! Their more gentle interactions are believable while both still are the untrustworthy, evil kind-of-allies who never fully trusted each other.
Please, please, write more of this gem! <3
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