Prompt Post No. 1

[norse_kink]

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Comments

Fill: How to use yourself [1/3]

[anonymous]

In the beginning Loki didn't realise what it was that he had been missing

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3]

[garamsythe]

This made me wibble. ;~;

Nicely done~

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3]

[asgardianthor]

OMG. HEARTMELT. Love the repetition (in Part 1 and Part 3). LIKE WOW, this is too sad :((

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3]

[maverikloki]

Geh! This is so beautiful. Heartbreaking, but beautiful.

Poor lonely Loki. I like all the psychological nuances you included, with Loki wondering if there were something wrong with him, etc., and that was a wonderful use of repetition tying together the beginning and the end. I do wish someone had noticed how lonely he was though, poor thing. T__T

DON'T WORRY, LOKI, I WILL HUG YOU!!! D:

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3]

[ikol_liesmith]

Yet Thor's body was stiff, his posture awkward, and the moment Loki allowed it he softly pushed Loki back.

It's so chilly and I want to hit Thor. Then I'll pull Loki into a hug and never let go!!

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3]

[cynthiaaqualin]

This is just great! The sadness spills everywhere. And the last repeating paragraphs make my nose sour.

[anonymous]

This was really well done. I loved the language, and the use of repetition. It has a hollow, hopeless sort of feel which is really just lovely.

Re: Fill: How to use yourself [2/3]

[anonymous]

CRYING

I keep rereading this because it's so amazing and relatable. How can something so simple and short mess me up so much?

<3