Round 12

Sep 18, 2012 12:43

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Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1a/?] anonymous December 5 2012, 16:58:59 UTC
Inspiration: Title comes from Woodkid - Iron.
***A small brown rat ran close to the old stone wall, sniffing out crumbs of food that it could hide in one of the many burrows it occupied. But it seemed that the dungeon lacked anything edible as the rat wagged her tail once and disappeared ( ... )

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1b/?] anonymous December 5 2012, 17:03:01 UTC
The young man tried to move, but agonizing pain coursed through his body immediately and made him clench his teeth as not to cry out. Loki stilled at once and slowly returned to his previous position, leaving the ghost of his injuries ache slightly ( ... )

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] anonymous December 5 2012, 17:06:51 UTC
***He was led through the halls of the fortress, and there was nothing else these cold grey walls without any decoration could be. A fortress for keeping prisoners and for protection against aggression of other Svartalfar Lords, no doubt ( ... )

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] anonymous December 6 2012, 04:30:32 UTC
Oh My, it is... awesome! Will there be more?

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] anutty1 December 6 2012, 05:30:27 UTC
Excellent writing; I hope there is more!

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] anonymous December 6 2012, 06:10:18 UTC
Color me interested, I'll follow this.

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] maxi1234 December 6 2012, 15:42:21 UTC
Oooh, interesting start! I hope to see more soon.

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] anonymous December 7 2012, 11:28:33 UTC
This is hitting all my buttons!

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] lokibitch07 December 7 2012, 19:39:15 UTC
Argh.... I LOVE it when Loki fights back...
I hope we get to read a little more about his..ahm...possession by the Svartalfar.
Cause, you know, I am going to hell already, so that would make it even more worth it!

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 1c/?] semiseverus December 7 2012, 22:46:36 UTC
Wow, this is a fantastic start! I hope there's more! :D

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Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 2/?] anonymous January 20 2013, 19:20:13 UTC
Time ran slowly ( ... )

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 2/?] maxi1234 January 21 2013, 10:03:35 UTC
Wow, I really like the imagery here.

Hope there's more soon!

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 2/?] jasoninna January 21 2013, 14:21:53 UTC
OMG! YES! Please, more.

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Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 3/?] anonymous March 19 2013, 18:07:11 UTC
He wanted to beg. For sleep. - The sound of screams and pleas of those tortured in front of him. - For death. - The feeling of his skin being touched by blood-stained hands and whispers telling him to look and remember. - For salvation. - Stop it, take off these shackles, set me free. Let me go. - But there were no words said ( ... )

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 3/?] poweroffunk March 19 2013, 19:21:30 UTC
An update omggggggggggggggggg!!!

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Re: Where Innocence is burned in Flames. [Part 3/?] paintmeviolent March 21 2013, 04:41:49 UTC
You cannot even imagine how your words are so similar to what I said when I finally posted it. Thank you.

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