In case you wonder why I'm doing this, it's simple -- with all the crap going on in my life, I need to quickly increase my readership, which will help me out financially in the long run....
Hi. I have been reading this, and I just wanted to say, this is e-book is the best formatted e-book I've seen on Smashwords. It looks really nice on my Nook. I'm only partially through reading it, but I did notice a couple typos or scan errors (much fewer than in a lot of e-books though).
In Dream 3, it says, "Upon its main great sail of white canvass was painted a grand golden sun..." I think that canvass was meant to be canvas.
In Dream 4, it says, "A cold evening wind disturbed lose filaments of hair from her unkempt long dark braids." I think that "lose" was meant to be "loose."
I've posted about this offer on Kindle and Nook message forums. I hope it helps get more eyes on the story.
Many thanks for pointing these typos out! In fact, if you find any more as you keep reading, do me a favor please and let me know, so that I can fix all of them at once.
I finished reading this morning, and I only noticed two other misspellings/typos.
Dream 12: "It was whispered among the servants that he could singlehandedly defend their Princess from harm, if such a need arose." - "singlehandedly" should be "single-handedly."
Dream 14: "While their skins were darker that ours and of an olive hue,..." - "that" should be "than."
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In Dream 3, it says, "Upon its main great sail of white canvass was painted a grand golden sun..." I think that canvass was meant to be canvas.
In Dream 4, it says, "A cold evening wind disturbed lose filaments of hair from her unkempt long dark braids." I think that "lose" was meant to be "loose."
I've posted about this offer on Kindle and Nook message forums. I hope it helps get more eyes on the story.
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Enjoy the book! :-)
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Dream 12: "It was whispered among the servants that he could singlehandedly defend their Princess from harm, if such a need arose." - "singlehandedly" should be "single-handedly."
Dream 14: "While their skins were darker that ours and of an olive hue,..." - "that" should be "than."
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