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vexed_wench April 21 2009, 19:49:20 UTC
They do still love each other.
I have faith they will fix it.

Jean really is good friend , I bet Roy will make him miserable for allowing him to thin they were a couple.

When Liam offered to hug Ed that was so awwww filling.

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nomdeplume13 April 21 2009, 19:59:56 UTC
Thanks for reading. They love one another and at least Ed's trying to work out his issues with Roy so that if Roy finally makes a gesture, something can happen.

Roy's already been making his life miserable. :)

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shinelumiere April 21 2009, 20:09:09 UTC
as I continue to say, the child will fix all. Liam once again swims in cuteness, and I wouldn't have him any other way.

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nomdeplume13 April 23 2009, 15:54:11 UTC
Liam's hard to keep from going over the top with the sweetness, but I'm glad you like him.

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rinfang April 21 2009, 22:41:21 UTC
I am always so excited to see a new chapter for this :)

I like how mature you've made both Ed and Al. In most fics it's always Roy who is the mature one in the relationship, but I tend to lean more towards how you've portrayed Roy and Ed here. Ed can be immature in a lot of ways, but to my knowledge (it's been a while since I read the manga or watched the anime) he is always shown to be very mature when it comes to his relationships with others. The same cannot be said of Roy.

And Liam is just adorable <3 Cute and sweet without being overly so.

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nomdeplume13 April 23 2009, 15:55:15 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying this so much. I figure Ed and Al are both pretty mature as teenagers, so why wouldn't they be as young adults.

Glad you like Liam. It's a fine line between sweet and annoying.

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amethyst_koneko April 22 2009, 00:11:33 UTC
Liam: "I know you hurt today, but... if you didn’t, I think I’d have to hug you." me: Awwwww! :) Liam is just so sweet! I just love the little guy so much! <333

*sigh* Now why am I not surprised that Ed took part of the circles onto himself? *headdesk* Shoulda known he'd take such a risk especially since it's to help Liam. He's always doing stuff like this that make you love him all the more for his selflessness and wanna clobber him for doing such dangerous things as this all at the same time. Roy's not the only very easy and very difficult man to love! :)

Speaking of Roy, I hope he gets his act together soon. I really liked how both Ed and Al gave him a bit of a verbal smackdown! :D Ed, cutting off Roy's excuses: "I don’t care what you meant to do." Al, telling it like it is: "Unfortunately, Roy, that’s exactly what you did. You are very good at making assumptions." Amen to that! :D Here's to hoping that Roy will quit being so damned self-destructive. :)

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nomdeplume13 April 23 2009, 16:43:41 UTC
Thanks for reading.
Yeah, you know Ed is difficult to love to, but what he does that you want to smack him for, it's usually out of love anyway. Roy just needs a good smack across the back of his head, sometimes, doesn't he?

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hikaru_9 April 22 2009, 05:46:09 UTC
I love this fic <3

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nomdeplume13 April 23 2009, 16:45:43 UTC
Thank you. Glad you do.

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