Pinto Round Robin - Divalicious, Chapter 6/10

[nolikereally]

Title: Divalicious, Chapter 6/10
Author: nolikereally (also known as elise_the_great)
Beta: ewinfic, beedlebarg, and planet_pinto all looked at this, but don't blame them if anything's wrong.
Pairing: Chris/Zach (with a strong dose of Churban)
Rating: NC-17 with lots of cockery.
Word Count: 9,799 (oh lord)
Disclaimer: I don't even know these people, I just cast them in roles for my own sick

Comments

[the_deep_magic]

AAAAAAAAAH, THIS IS AWESOME!

Love that you brought the rest of the Scooby Gang back in. And my new favorite phrase is "caustic bitchface." I can SEE John Cho making that face!

“Yeah,” choked out Zach, “he’s a good guy.”

Awww, I like that you let us see under Zach's defenses and get a sense of why he is the way he is.

Okay, and then the hotness of the closet scene sort of wipes my mind blank for a little while.

He sat back down to thunderous applause, and Chris clapped too, wishing wildly that he could have gone back in time and found young Zach and made it all okay.

Ohhhh, my heart just breaks for Zach in this -- all he wants is to be loved and respected, he just doesn't know HOW.

Eeeeeee, more sex! Tongue breaks! Spankings! And ohhhh, the aaaaaaangst! I love every word of the cockery!

[soonest_mended]

SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT BB. I still can't believe I got it all out, let alone have any of it turn out decently. YOUR COMMENT IS MAKING ME EXTREMELY HAPPY

[withthepilot]

BOSSY, ROUGH, FOUL-MOUTHED CHRIS

IS IT MY BIRTHDAY?

[soonest_mended]

I DON'T KNOW, IS IT? BECAUSE YOUR BIRTHDAY REQUIRES A DAMN SIGHT MORE ROUGH SEX THAN THIS

[therumjournals]

GAHHHHH this was awesome!

not only had he failed to cure Zach of being a walking disaster, he’d fucked him. - uh, whoops!

i have to say, i'm pretttty in love with karl in this. he can grab and hurt me any day.

Don’t get me wrong, you’re a fun time once your mouth is full - unf

and then zach jerking off after chris left AND THEN LATER IN THE COAT CLOSET OH MY GOD. and then at the end it's all like WHO HAS CONTROL PROBLEMS NOW, WHOA THERE CHRIS!

good stuff. good good stuff.

[nolikereally]

SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT HOMFG. Seriously your comments make me all giddy and reeling with delight, negl

[aliassmith]

Dude. Dude! I can't fucking follow this! You are an evil, evil, brilliant mastermind of evil brilliance.

I love what you did with Zach here-- laying some depth on his diva ways. This line made my stomach flip: “I get the idea that you don’t like me at all, if you want honesty. I can deal with that, as long as you don’t treat me like nothing.”

And Chris. Good god, your Chris. I want to bite him. Hard.

You owned this.

[nolikereally]

I'M SO EFFING GLAD YOU LIKED IT. I had been TERRIFIED that I was going to stink up the Divalicious fever with trololo-tastic angst, but OH MY LORD I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. AND THAT YOU COULD WORK WITH IT. AND JUST HNNNNNNGGGGHHHHH

[evawhimsy]

omg this was... viciously hot. you have quite the talent for nc-17, my friend.

[nolikereally]

yaaaaaaay thank you! XD I can't believe I actually got it all written without spontaneously combusting tbh