Comments | noclueontheloo: fic: Pucker Up (rps: Cheryl / Kimberley)

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fic: Pucker Up (rps: Cheryl / Kimberley)

Sep 05, 2010 12:02

Title: Pucker Up
Series: Spiralling (Part Nine)
Author: noclueontheloo
Fandom: Girls Aloud, Cheryl Cole/Kimberley Walsh (RPS)
Word Count: 4003
A/N: Thanks to displacedaway for giving me the idea for a cute scene
Summary: They’d be drinking by the side of a pool as darkness descended, lighting her cigarettes for her and telling her how amazing it would be when ( Read more... )

kimberley walsh, fic: chim rps, fic: spiralling, cheryl cole

Comments 13

anonymous September 5 2010, 15:06:04 UTC

Your fics are absolutely brilliant! Please update again soon! I'm really worried for Cheryl, the scary thing is that it could happen in reality, terrifying thought!
You're a very talented writer. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next part. xx

noclueontheloo September 5 2010, 17:59:31 UTC

Thanks very much. I don't think you'll have to wait as long for the next part - I really need to clear my desk of this fic, it's taken far too long. Glad you enjoyed it.

3121_afkap September 5 2010, 22:50:39 UTC

wow!!! unexpected turn but seriously felt everything u wrote i actually felt drousy! I absolutely love this big style! cant wait for your updates. You are really talented! thank you

noclueontheloo September 6 2010, 09:55:48 UTC

Awesome, thank you! I think this might have been my favourite chapter to write so far, but then I'm slow at writing that I've usually gforgotten how it felt to write the previous one. Chuffed you're sticking with it.

walkingprimrose September 5 2010, 23:43:34 UTC

It's so well written. You know, even though Cheryl is not and would not take drugs, it makes sense because of the context of the fic and her personality and mental chaos in it. And I like it because it surprises me (in a good way) and there's hardly any Chim fic that surprises me anymore. You can almost know when the "babe" is going to be said and how they are going to propose to each other. And your fic is so different from all that. And, drugs aside, it feels very realistic.

I loved it. Hope you don't make us wait for too long for the next one.

noclueontheloo September 6 2010, 09:58:13 UTC

Aw, that's great, cheers very much. Whatever the real life Cheryl does or doesn't get up to, the Cheryl in this fic is a hot mess. I hope it's as much reading about her as it is writing her.

Next update will not be in a million years, I promise. It's time I put this fic to bed.

displacedaway September 7 2010, 05:35:28 UTC

This chapter took me by surprise. I'm not quite sure why it did because Cheryl has had this dark presence looming over her the entire fic - the self-deprecation, Kimberley thinking she had attempted suicide, etc - but for some reason I did not see this coming at all ( ... )

noclueontheloo September 7 2010, 17:53:55 UTC

I love your "essays of feedback" they are awesome. I'm truly flattered that anything I write creates such an impression for people to bother with such feedback so big big thanks, truly ( ... )

lemon_pencil September 16 2010, 00:54:03 UTC

Wow, this part is great. I really got the sense, which I often think must be true, that it's so easy for celebrities to get sucked into doing things they shouldn't, because it's all lights and parties and attention and they must feel like nothing bad could happen to them. So despite Cheryl being anti-drugs and stuff, this still works and feels real and she's in character and everything. Great job! Please don't make us wait too long for the next bit! :)